How does this look?

[Selena_Reborn]

I cant really touch up anything major because the original SAI file got erased in a computer shut down... I can tweak with stuff though, and the background is fair game. I struggle with real backgrounds so I do this weird color stuff. Anything I should tweak? ^^;

He was a commission of this character:
here

[venus6catss]

It looks good just the arm reaching out is a little awkward
but other then that all he needs is more depth
so more shadows and highlights~
hope this help <3