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Post: 2564738_1 created on Fri, 11 Jun 2004 05:49:52 +0000
Posted: Fri, 11 Jun 2004 05:49:52 +0000

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Post: 2564738_2 created on Fri, 11 Jun 2004 05:58:04 +0000
Posted: Fri, 11 Jun 2004 05:58:04 +0000

i just noticed some erased guidelines that look like something naughty, i am so sorry

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Post: 2564738_3 created on Fri, 11 Jun 2004 06:13:04 +0000
Posted: Fri, 11 Jun 2004 06:13:04 +0000

Her eyes are of different sizes and her lips are on a completely different angle from the rest of her face (though I think they're at a better angle to fit with the body than the rest of the face)
The body itself is pretty good 3nodding
BTW I wouldn't have noticed the erased lines if you hadn't of mentioned it xd

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Post: 2564738_4 created on Fri, 11 Jun 2004 07:01:52 +0000
Posted: Fri, 11 Jun 2004 07:01:52 +0000

she seems lacking in the rib cage area. That an imporant structure, what with holding vital organs and allowing lung capacity...so it's good to block it out with simple shapes with you begin a sketch/drawing.

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Post: 2564738_5 created on Fri, 11 Jun 2004 16:52:48 +0000
Posted: Fri, 11 Jun 2004 16:52:48 +0000

Page Boy

this is more of a practice on her face, and i do use shapes to begin my drawings

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