AkaiRingo
Right. After being entirely too lazy for the past two weeks (I blame the release of Diablo III), I've done some more dailies. I did four, instead of two, tonight, in hopes it will help. Also, damn those fecking cylinders. They hate me. They always look squished unless I draw them standing up!



As usual, left to right is the order they were drawn in.
Can you take a picture of the actual set up you're for at least one of the dailies when you post the next batch? (Preferably the best one. I think that would help me help you.)
Don't worry about your cylinders for now. The problem is that you're drawing an oval, when you need to draw an ellipse. (An ellipse is a circle in perspective. Which is why I don't want to get into it, because we're not going to get into perspective any time soon.) Seb posted something that will help, but I'm not going to explain it in week 3. I've decided to stick to the core stuff and deal with draftsmanship a little later. Of course, I can work with you one on one with the draftsmanship, like I have been working with Seb.
What I want to work with you on is composition and spatial relationships. Week 3 is about just seeing and drawing 3D space, but it's complex and I won't be able to cover composition. That will have to be next time.
The second and third ones are your stronger ones this time around, because the interactions and placement gives more of a sense of where the objects are and how they're constructed. The others look more like it was made up rather than drawn from objects.
Actually, do me a favor and try drawing this one: