first tablet drawing

[jezter]

so yea here it is critics welcome but please dont just flame i know my stuff is terrible and i am practicing slowly but surely so yea..
burning_eyes

terrible picture here


edit: so yea i just noticed i misspelled "first" (fisrt) in the title but it is now fixed yay for my stupidness

[dinysrawr]

Could I critique and maybe give you some advice? It's very cute and you have a definite style but I think you will produce much better work if you used a center line (it's very off center) and the awesome thing about using a tablet is that you can erase it completely away :3

I'm not sure if you use construction, but if you practice a lot of that (construction is basically when you use faint circles and lines and all sorts of shapes to get the basic form) you'll notice a huge difference. A lot of people think construction is for people who are just beginning/learning art but I can assure you that the greatest artists out there use construction ;p

Congratulations on your tablet by the way! They are so much fun, right?

[jezter]

dinysrawr

Could I critique and maybe give you some advice? It's very cute and you have a definite style but I think you will produce much better work if you used a center line (it's very off center) and the awesome thing about using a tablet is that you can erase it completely away :3

I'm not sure if you use construction, but if you practice a lot of that (construction is basically when you use faint circles and lines and all sorts of shapes to get the basic form) you'll notice a huge difference. A lot of people think construction is for people who are just beginning/learning art but I can assure you that the greatest artists out there use construction ;p

Congratulations on your tablet by the way! They are so much fun, right?

actually your comment is exactly the kind of response i was hoping for as for the construction i do use it quiet alot in my drawing styles just going from paper to tablet is one heck of a change that im trying to overcome and yea i kinda did a very obscure line on this one it was nowhere near strait and didnt really notice that till i was done so said the heck with it lets see what the public thinks 4laugh and i very much love the advice you are offering me that is one thing i will never turn down is sound advice thank you x1000 heart heart

[Puppys-kitten]

I think you're amazing, but i am biase ^.^