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Elf chick. Should I finish? Critique?
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Post: 41450309_1 created on Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:04 amPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:04 am
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Excuse me, has anybody seen the bridge?


So, I decided I should try to draw a beautiful woman, as I rarely ever draw them. I was focusing on the lips...They're some of the better lips I've drawn. But I'd like some critique, and also if you guys think I should "ink" and color it or not. I really like it, but I don't know if she's elegant enough. If I do decide to finish her I'll give her some jewelry and whatnot...


  
     



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Post: 41450309_2 created on Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:41 amPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:41 am
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Yes, I think that you should finish it heart 3nodding

But I think that her neck is too long and her shoulders are too small, just to let you know
     
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Post: 41450309_3 created on Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:08 amPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:08 am
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yep. finish it smile looks good so far
 
     
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Post: 41450309_4 created on Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:11 amPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:11 am
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I think it looks good, but the neck is too long and shoulders should be a bit uh.. broader? I mean wider. I think the lips are okay, but you could try to make them bigger.

other than that, it would probably turn out nicely.
     
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Post: 41450309_5 created on Wed Jul 02, 2008 5:10 pmPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 5:10 pm
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I like it. I think you should finish it.

Maybe a bit boring pose, if she doesn't have anything else than that (jewelry, tattoos, accessories), nut it still pretty ^^

She really looks like an elf!
 
     



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Post: 41450309_6 created on Wed Jul 02, 2008 9:36 pmPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 9:36 pm
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finish it,
but make the face, a bit wider,
see there her right eye is,
it looks squished.
Make the line beside the face go a bit more up as it gets closer the the forehead.
     

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Post: 41450309_7 created on Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:44 amPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:44 am
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her left eye is too small.

what program are you using? i want to advise you against restating your lines, especially when sketching. it just slows down the work pace.
 
     
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Post: 41450309_8 created on Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:23 pmPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:23 pm
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He left eye seems a tad too small and her neck is too long. Other than that, I cannot find any other problems. I hope it turns out nicely. :]
     


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Post: 41450309_9 created on Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:38 pmPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:38 pm
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As they said, the neck is too long and the shoulders need to be wider. I hope this helps.

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Post: 41450309_10 created on Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:21 pmPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:21 pm
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I agree with the people and if you are going to use that posee then spam some details on her so she doesnt look so simple.
     
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