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Critque or tips ; v;?

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Deerbuns
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It doesn't suck.

I would think that you aren't getting a flood of helpful hints for two reasons:

*It's actually pretty good.
* It's very hard to see at the size it is and people don't want to hassle with it.
xNotDeadYetx
It doesn't suck.

I would think that you aren't getting a flood of helpful hints for two reasons:

*It's actually pretty good.
* It's very hard to see at the size it is and people don't want to hassle with it.


I have a Darker Lining of it if that helps any? ; A; And I need help trying to figure out the adjustment of the arm, I know it looks off. ; v;
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The arm on the left: Her elbow needs to be closer to her body, where you have the dotted outline.

Your art is great, its just a hassle to scroll over!
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when you make art the only critque you need is your own : 3 so its good if u think its good
Omg! Thats not even close to bad! In fact it is super cute so far! Keep working on it so everyone can see the end result! ^3^ 4laugh rofl heart 3nodding
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Cute and not bad at all. You're worrying to much I think ^_^
Details good, as far as I can tell (my pc has bad color/lighting, and your arts light and not very easy to see), and I do hope you post something when finished, so we can see the completed work. This has the potential to be excellent.
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Way better then mine. Without a doubt.
Just need's a darker shade and one of her arm's don't seem right I really can't point it out.
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Darker lining seems to be one of the minor flaws of the art piece, but then again its one of my flaws as well. Its really good so there's not much for me to critique about it.

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