Do i need to add anything ales? "Last kiss"

[mooncherrypop2]

MoeDeToes

I love it. Very good job on the lips.

Thanks XD!!! I took a will with it tho hahha.

[mooncherrypop2]

pixelface captain

I'd say clean it up and ink it. Best way I've come across to clean up images before coloring and inking is A)Tracing paper, but the paper itself is kind of flimsy and bothersome at times, but it is the easiest and possibly cheapest way. B)Vellum, you can buy entire reams of vellum at scrapbook stores and it can be dead useful, the only thing is that you have to have a steady hand when tracing it, because if you erase on vellum it'll turn up really messy on a scan or photograph. C) I use the glass coffee table that I've got, and a camping light, and then create a make shift tracing table. If you've got the glass table, I really suggest this one.

Past that, if you want to keep it messy (and it is sort of endearing this way - reminds me in a good way of old school anime style) then I don't see anything that you could add. The composition is a little unbalanced, imo, but you said that you added the girl in later, and so it's not something you can really help. Good work, I really appreciate and enjoy your art style biggrin

I'm very bad in inking but thanks for the tips. Ya, i am planning to keep it like this. I think it look better without colour. Thanks again XDDD!!!

[I am Wonder R]

Fur of a Satyr

I like it. <3 I say the nose of the guy is a little long, but that might just be your style. <3

No, his nose was perfect. Try drawing some red lines. If it were any shorter it would look ridiculous.

mooncherrypop2

Thank you xd !!! But I think the " long, thin strands for hair" is actually the shading because his skin is already dark and i tried making the shading different. Thanks for the comment again XD!!!

What she meant was, the hair looks kinda chunky. It doesn't have much detail at all. She wasn't saying he has the long, thin strands for hair, she's saying that he doesn't, and that's what she's accustomed to. Other than the hair, which I think you should definitely detail some more, it looks near perfect. The hands are something that people rarely pick up easily, and the way you've mastered them is incredible. Great job. Really.

[Drowningwaters]

It looks very good. I really like what you did with the hands. However..I agree. the hair is blocky and compleatly destroys the image. please stay consistant.

[mooncherrypop2]

I am Wonder R

Fur of a Satyr

I like it. <3 I say the nose of the guy is a little long, but that might just be your style. <3

No, his nose was perfect. Try drawing some red lines. If it were any shorter it would look ridiculous.

mooncherrypop2

Thank you xd !!! But I think the " long, thin strands for hair" is actually the shading because his skin is already dark and i tried making the shading different. Thanks for the comment again XD!!!

What she meant was, the hair looks kinda chunky. It doesn't have much detail at all. She wasn't saying he has the long, thin strands for hair, she's saying that he doesn't, and that's what she's accustomed to. Other than the hair, which I think you should definitely detail some more, it looks near perfect. The hands are something that people rarely pick up easily, and the way you've mastered them is incredible. Great job. Really.

Thanks XD. Actually, for the hair, i wanted left it blank to create some kind of effect. Because the girl's hair is already lines. For the hands, i had to look at my own hahhaha XD. Thanks again XD.

[Snizz Lycan]

Oh wow. I love this one. I really like the shading around the male's lips and how smooth the lines are. I'd say to add more to his hair.. Like coloring it and add some shading for texture.

Other than that, this is quite amazing. You are extremely talented 3nodding