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If ur wondering why is the guy in the middle because i draw him 1st then the girl came waaaaay after him. So, that is y. Anyway, i was wondering if i needed to add anything ales in this picture or not. 3nodding

 
     
 
    I like it. :]

    I especially like the hands, you draw them AND shade them very well. The only thing that bugs me is the guy's hair, but that might be because I'm accustomed to long, thin strands for hair. Still looks good, either way. :]
     









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    I like it. :]

    I especially like the hands, you draw them AND shade them very well. The only thing that bugs me is the guy's hair, but that might be because I'm accustomed to long, thin strands for hair. Still looks good, either way. :]


Thank you xd !!! But I think the " long, thin strands for hair" is actually the shading because his skin is already dark and i tried making the shading different. Thanks for the comment again XD!!!
 
     
 
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You're a Great Artist ^^


Hahaha no not really. I still have a lot to improve on but thanks XD.
 
     
 
I like it. <3 I say the nose of the guy is a little long, but that might just be your style. <3
     
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I like it. <3 I say the nose of the guy is a little long, but that might just be your style. <3


Yeah, it is hahahah ^^. Thanks.
 
     
 
I love the pic Did you shade it in with charcol? , anyway i am not much of a artist. I would show you one of my pics but i dont have a scanner yet!!! sweatdrop
     
Zz-Aqua_Lover-zZ
Add some color to that pic && you'll be set to roll. <3
 
     
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Zz-Aqua_Lover-zZ
I love the pic Did you shade it in with charcol? , anyway i am not much of a artist. I would show you one of my pics but i dont have a scanner yet!!! sweatdrop


Thanks XD. No, i just used pencil. I would love to see it. Actually, this picture is taken with my camera. I don't have a scanner either hahha sweatdrop
     
Meire
Add some color to that pic && you'll be set to roll. <3


Oh really? I think that would be a bit difficult becoz it's kinda messy. sweatdrop hahaha
 
     
 
i am envious how well you draw. Maybe you could add a little to the back. Where are they? In the street or a room?
     
MirrorMan_4
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I love it. Very good job on the lips.
 
     
 
I'd say clean it up and ink it. Best way I've come across to clean up images before coloring and inking is A)Tracing paper, but the paper itself is kind of flimsy and bothersome at times, but it is the easiest and possibly cheapest way. B)Vellum, you can buy entire reams of vellum at scrapbook stores and it can be dead useful, the only thing is that you have to have a steady hand when tracing it, because if you erase on vellum it'll turn up really messy on a scan or photograph. C) I use the glass coffee table that I've got, and a camping light, and then create a make shift tracing table. If you've got the glass table, I really suggest this one.

Past that, if you want to keep it messy (and it is sort of endearing this way - reminds me in a good way of old school anime style) then I don't see anything that you could add. The composition is a little unbalanced, imo, but you said that you added the girl in later, and so it's not something you can really help. Good work, I really appreciate and enjoy your art style biggrin
     
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MirrorMan_4
i am envious how well you draw. Maybe you could add a little to the back. Where are they? In the street or a room?

Too tell u the truth... i don't know... hahha XD. But thanks. I'll try seeing what i can add.
 
     
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