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So first picture I started working on.. after my concussion. Its way different than what I normally tend to draw.
Needless to say... I kinda stink.. but I get art lessons in June- so I suppose its all good ^.^


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First, I would like to point out that their hands are backwards, and also, do you want a red-line?
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The first thing I noticed was their mouths. The make it look like they both inherited some kind of jaw bone disorder or something. 'Ya know?

Then for the one on the right, I would either try to make it more obvious that the body's facing more towards the viewers, or make his head at less of an angle! This way his neck doesn't look broken!

And then, as was already mentioned, the hands a kinda backwards. xp
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Red_Head01
First, I would like to point out that their hands are backwards, and also, do you want a red-line?


Ack!
I have this horrible habbit of drawing hands backwards >.<
A quick explanation of the issues would work, since I know red lining can take some time ^.^'
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The first thing I noticed was their mouths. The make it look like they both inherited some kind of jaw bone disorder or something. 'Ya know?

Then for the one on the right, I would either try to make it more obvious that the body's facing more towards the viewers, or make his head at less of an angle! This way his neck doesn't look broken!

And then, as was already mentioned, the hands a kinda backwards. xp


I could never draw heads/faces correctly xd
I probably should have referenced their heads though.

ah, yeah, I will have to fix that then.
Thanks. ^.^
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minnime390
The first thing I noticed was their mouths. The make it look like they both inherited some kind of jaw bone disorder or something. 'Ya know?

Then for the one on the right, I would either try to make it more obvious that the body's facing more towards the viewers, or make his head at less of an angle! This way his neck doesn't look broken!

And then, as was already mentioned, the hands a kinda backwards. xp


I could never draw heads/faces correctly xd
I probably should have referenced their heads though.

ah, yeah, I will have to fix that then.
Thanks. ^.^

Cool beans! I can't wait to see the finished one!
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minnime390
The first thing I noticed was their mouths. The make it look like they both inherited some kind of jaw bone disorder or something. 'Ya know?

Then for the one on the right, I would either try to make it more obvious that the body's facing more towards the viewers, or make his head at less of an angle! This way his neck doesn't look broken!

And then, as was already mentioned, the hands a kinda backwards. xp


I could never draw heads/faces correctly xd
I probably should have referenced their heads though.

ah, yeah, I will have to fix that then.
Thanks. ^.^

Cool beans! I can't wait to see the finished one!


: D
I will have to post the finished drawing when Im done with it then ^.^
And eventually the ccolored picture, since I do want to try and color this too.

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