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[FluffiKitten]

Soo, any redlines or stuff like that would be lovely.
Do keep in mind the style tho, some things are supose to be a bit exaggerated ;D

[Hesperia the Goddess]

FluffiKitten

I feel like her face/chin is a funny shape... Chubby cheeks maybe? (Or you might have meant to have done that, I don't know) Also regarding the face, I think she needs to have a slight line vertically curved line (did I say that correctly?) to show where her nose is.
She has no hip bone.... Which bothers me....

Sorry that I can't redline to show where everything is, I don't have that sort of technology and my drawing on the computer are disgusting.

[Crazy Scribbles]

Her eyes are a bit off, and one is a bit bigger than the other. Although it's okay to have your own features and exaggerate the style, make sure that you at least position the parts of the face correctly. Her right eye is a bit too far over on her head, and there is more than an eye-width between the two eyes.
It's always good to have a basic understanding of the muscles, too, because that's when you can start exaggerating body parts. It's better to have that down-pat first before trying to go off and create your own style and anatomy. Not dissing on your drawing style, just saying that knowing anatomy is always a good thing. If you ever pursue a career in art, you'll find that out pretty quick, c:

[FluffiKitten]

Crazy Scribbles

Her eyes are a bit off, and one is a bit bigger than the other. Although it's okay to have your own features and exaggerate the style, make sure that you at least position the parts of the face correctly. Her right eye is a bit too far over on her head, and there is more than an eye-width between the two eyes.
It's always good to have a basic understanding of the muscles, too, because that's when you can start exaggerating body parts. It's better to have that down-pat first before trying to go off and create your own style and anatomy. Not dissing on your drawing style, just saying that knowing anatomy is always a good thing. If you ever pursue a career in art, you'll find that out pretty quick, c:

Yaah, I see that, I thought something was off there but I couldnt pin point it. Yah I have a decent understanding about the muscles/anatomy...at least with females >.> lol
Yah I totally understand that. Heard it alot from my high school art teachers lol
But of course I could always use improvement ^-^

[Lady Lagomorph]

I had a redline of this, then I couldn't find the thread for a few days and deleted it. Oh well... Anyway, the main points that bugged me besides those mentioned already are:

1. How straight the line from her right hip to her right knee is. I feel like it needs to curve out a little.

2. Her upper torso is so thin, I feel like there's no room for a ribcage. In that position, the bottom of her left ribcage would be a little accentuated, as she's straightening her spine and pushing it out a little.

You have a cute style in progress, though. Not bad work at all.

[FluffiKitten]

Lady Lagomorph

I had a redline of this, then I couldn't find the thread for a few days and deleted it. Oh well... Anyway, the main points that bugged me besides those mentioned already are:

1. How straight the line from her right hip to her right knee is. I feel like it needs to curve out a little.

2. Her upper torso is so thin, I feel like there's no room for a ribcage. In that position, the bottom of her left ribcage would be a little accentuated, as she's straightening her spine and pushing it out a little.

You have a cute style in progress, though. Not bad work at all.

awesome...those are great tips, didnt even notice that! thanks

[cerebralheart]

the only main thing that hasn't already been mentioned is (her) left leg- our right. With the pose you have her in, I think part of her ankle, if not just part of her foot would be showing. Also, the knee is a bit wonky, I'm not sure how to explain.. but overall its a good start! very cute smile

[Errol McGillivray]

She doesn't have a ribcage. Stylized or not, the skeleton needs to be intact. (Stylization is purposeful deformation, not forgetting or not knowing what goes where).

It shouldn't be too hard to find yourself some pictures of women to study. After you study some real women, look at some really good cartooned women. Regardless of the style, the anatomy is intact. (Shane Gilnes comes to mind.) Take note of the similarities, not the differences.