commissions up for crits

[Rikimaroki]

When you see my face...
Currently:: Drawing avi art
Mood:: Happy actually Oo
Mind Tricks
Fur Fun

I know you can hardly see them I'm sorry but the scanner isn't working right now so bear with me.

I would like red lines if able or maybe just little hits to make it better.
Avi 1
Avi 2
Avi 3
Avi 4
Avi 5

and for the 2nd one I forgot the wings and the tail is gonna be in a different position XP

Paws And Claws::Art Shop
Avi Art::Wanting
...hope it gives you hell

[Rani Prakash]

From what I can see they all look pretty good, maybe you should have a look at some anatomy if you haven't already, they seem slightly out of proportion but that's my only criticism, I'd love to see them in colour if you do them as well.
Hope that helps smile

[Rikimaroki]

When you see my face...
Currently:: Drawing avi art
Mood:: Happy actually Oo
Mind Tricks
Fur Fun

For most of it it is supposed to be like it is just to play the mood off more.

Paws And Claws::Art Shop
Avi Art::Wanting
...hope it gives you hell

[Eizoryu]

Is there any way you can clean up those pictures more? They're really tough to see D:
If you have one, take a digital camera, set the papers down in a well-lit area (natural sunlight or those sunlight-mimicking lightbulbs work best), turn off the flash, and take pictures of them that way. I guarantee you'll get cleaner pictures that way. :3

Or if you have a scanner, naturally that would be the best way. I would crit, but I'm just having a really tough time seeing the pictures.

[psycho_blades]

Rikimaroki

When you see my face...
Currently:: Drawing avi art
Mood:: Happy actually Oo
Mind Tricks
Fur Fun

I know you can hardly see them I'm sorry but the scanner isn't working right now so bear with me.

Paws And Claws::Art Shop
Avi Art::Wanting
...hope it gives you hell