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okay so i've been doing some clothes design and I would be extremely grateful for any critique!
1. military trench coat
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2. visual kei inspired isometric coat
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link to my deviantart: http://bleachluva2.deviantart.com

edit: changed the picture of the military coat. unfinished dragon scale pattern
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I love them both. I think the fishnet one would look great in dark teal, too.
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Wow I really love the visual Kei one, I would buy that in a heartbeat. I think the studs were an especially good idea for it as well~
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Wow I really love the visual Kei one, I would buy that in a heartbeat. I think the studs were an especially good idea for it as well~
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I love them both. I think the fishnet one would look great in dark teal, too.

Thank you very much for the feedback! Is there anything that you think could be improved or anything I could add? also, I changed the picture so now it has the unfinished dragon scale pattern on
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Perhaps a V-neck on the Kei.

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Wow I really love the visual Kei one, I would buy that in a heartbeat. I think the studs were an especially good idea for it as well~
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I love them both. I think the fishnet one would look great in dark teal, too.

Thank you very much for the feedback! Is there anything that you think could be improved or anything I could add? also, I changed the picture so now it has the unfinished dragon scale pattern on
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Well I'm not very good at clothes designing but I personally think some studding on the pants or maybe a contrasting colour somewhere might make them seem like a bit more of a pair? But again Im no good with clothes design sweatdrop

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