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Post: 41538643_1 created on Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:36 amPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:36 am
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This is a character concept that I came up with today to play with Crisscoula.
I wonder if this character will be liked or not.

Kyri is 'loosely' based off of the Three Spotted Domino Damselfish... they are able to change sex if they need to for reproduction and survival of their harem. So I thought that would be an interesting concept to work off of... only Kyri is able to change all throughout his/her life... though I will keep the five day transition period between genders, so it's not like... POOF girl POOF boy!
Though I bet that would be hilarious. XD

So... any tips, hints, things to change or fiddle with? Alright... I added a bust shot, because I changed how I want his hair to look. I like this hair style MUCH better.
[first rough sketch of Kyri]
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/9992/kyriml8.png http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/4717/kyribustza5.png
 
     
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Post: 41538643_2 created on Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:42 pmPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:42 pm
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Since this is in the WIP forum, I'm not sure how far along this is in relation to where you intend to take it, but I would fix up your linework. Just ignore that if you were gonna do it already X{D;;

Secondly, it seems like he has really overly pronounced shoulders in comparison to his scrawny little arms. I'd make 'em just a tad thicker, or the area between the shoulders / arms just a tad thinner.

A few more wrinkles on his shirt would help add form. Right now he looks kinda flat in that area. Also, don't hide the hands! People can spot it from a mile away, it's just bad composition

I'm digging the concept and overall design of the character. ^^ Looking forward to updates.
     

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Post: 41538643_3 created on Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:02 pmPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:02 pm
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I'm actually fairly good with hands. I honestly just wanted to have his hands in his pockets. LOL

Agreed. His arms are scrawny. I will flesh them out further if I continue with this line-art of him. I will also fix his hair... oi... just looks horrid right now. XD
 
     
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Post: 41538643_4 created on Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:48 amPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:48 am
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Okay, I fixed the lines, his hair and a few other random things.
So... any more advice on this piece?
     
I'm afraid to love you like I did before.
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/3036/sexinazismyb2.jpg
But I do still love you.
~ forever ~

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