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[ Greetings. I am looking to receive some critique on this piece. I plan on adding colour to it soon, but before I do I would like to see if I can improve or fix anything. ]

[ Thank you kindly. ]

Those boobs. It looks like she cut a sphere in half and stuck it under her skin. Real boobs are more oval and hang, especially without bras.

Here's a simple tutorial on breasts.
VRiosArt


[ Thank you kindly for the tip and link. I'll fix them up right away. ]
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Sparkly Fatcat

i know someone already pointed it out but theres a different point i would like to make you see i'm sure theres some cases were this is wrong but from what iv'e seen usualy breast size increases with weight and she looks a little chubby compared to her breasts but other than that i think she looks fine.

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