Betty Paigish Hair?

[Melfies]

Was just trying to warm myself up, because there's no way I can focus in this house right now for something I care aboutfff.

So I painted this hooka. If you notice anything, feel free to call it out. It's still a pretty early wip.





Update Notes:

So I think I need to go back and maybe quirk up her eyebrow again, and show some more teeth -- I feel like I lost a bit of her expression in the rendering process.

[chat fleur]

This. Is. Incredible. I seriously don't know how you could possibly improve on it! It's just... Wow!! biggrin

[anger_banger]

i feel as if the top one has more personality. i do think that there may be a lil bit to much white outline around the eye wich almost makes it look like its popping out. i may be wrong but just my thought :3 very nice though

[Serendivinity]

The top one just looks and feels better to me, but the smoothness of the second one is lovely!
The only thing that puts me off is the back of her, it seems off to me, but maybe it's just me... It truly is a beautiful piece though!
And yeah, the teeth look lovely in the first picture, she looks more sultry.

[Requiem Rhapsody]

Her body needs to be more angled to the side or her head facing away a bit more. Since the neck/head can't turn that far over the shoulders.