avi art of myself - critique WIP? dun dun dunnnnn!

[Milk Meat]

soooo haven't drawn properly for, like, 3 years because i went to university and made sculpture/installation.

i really wanna get back into drawing, so what do ya'll think? i took the photo with iphoto and it mirrors images for some reason but it has helped me see already that the right shoulder is weird lol

i didn't scan it in cuz scanners be NOISSAAAAY and it would probs wake the baby ehhh

do you think it's worth me getting into selling avi art (not this sketchy obvs) after some fine-tuning?

[Milk Meat]

bump? no feedback at all?

[Zagachan]

The feet are different sizes. The eyes are different sizes. The head is too tall.

Other than that, good job.

[Errol McGillivray]

You got the likeness, but the legs don't follow the direction of the chest. The knee towards us should be more towards us. Right now, it's leaning away from us, due to it pointing more away than the chest is.

[Milk Meat]

Zagachan

The feet are different sizes. The eyes are different sizes. The head is too tall.

Other than that, good job.

i think the feet and eyes are supposed to be different sizes because of perspective? obviously this would be apparent if it was shaded and drawn better lol

[Milk Meat]

Errol McGillivray

You got the likeness, but the legs don't follow the direction of the chest. The knee towards us should be more towards us. Right now, it's leaning away from us, due to it pointing more away than the chest is.

hmm i dunno why the knee would be more towards us? i was going for the knees together and shins fanning out, so i need to change the position of the foot/shoe closest to us. thanks!

[Errol McGillivray]

Dolly ICU

Errol McGillivray

You got the likeness, but the legs don't follow the direction of the chest. The knee towards us should be more towards us. Right now, it's leaning away from us, due to it pointing more away than the chest is.

hmm i dunno why the knee would be more towards us? i was going for the knees together and shins fanning out, so i need to change the position of the foot/shoe closest to us. thanks!

Ah. I see. With the chest facing us, the underside of her butt would be visible. Because I can't see both thighs, I assumed that far knee was pointing away.

[Zagachan]

Dolly ICU

Zagachan

The feet are different sizes. The eyes are different sizes. The head is too tall.

Other than that, good job.

i think the feet and eyes are supposed to be different sizes because of perspective? obviously this would be apparent if it was shaded and drawn better lol

Then you wouldn't draw the legs as you did. If you're keeping the pose as-is (Which is fine, it's a good pose), then the foot in the back needs to be bigger.
Again, same with the eyes. The outer eye needs to sit closer to the other, and be a tiny bit bigger.