I'm in the middle of painting Homura Akemi from Madoka, and from here I plan to paint over the bazookas so they don't all look identical and also appear finished, fix some details on Homura, and also finish the overall background.
If you can point out any glaring issues for me, I would be eternally thankful if you do before I get too far into detailing stuff. O^O
Oh, and I'm also painting N from Pokemon, but something about his face seems kinda off and I don't know what it is.
your top piccy looks epic. for the bottom one i agree that i think the eyes might be a little off. i cant exactly put my finger on what but if your drawing program has a flip option usually flipping the image shows me what i am doing wrong.