Another WIP: Forbidden Spell

[TiffaLei]

I felt like drawing some youngins for a change... criticism or suggestions that could be changed for the better more than welcome ^_~ Thanks muchly for looking!

[Uniaqua]

Ooooh nice pic -- the color is really nice for the colored one -- love it 3nodding

[TiffaLei]

Thank you ! I'm attempting to color the BG now... ugh so many stupid books to paint >_<

[TiffaLei]

Completed? Yes, i'm very lazy with the hallway background...

[Amrai]

Yeah, I was gonna comment on the bg, but... wow. Very nice.

[AlphaGlitch]

wow... heart

[Feldspar]

The girl on the right (I assume it's a girl, at least?) doesn't look like she's focusing her eyes on anything--it looks a bit odd.

[Itoko]

Feldspar

The girl on the right (I assume it's a girl, at least?) doesn't look like she's focusing her eyes on anything--it looks a bit odd.

I sorta see that too. Other than that it's real nice...

[Kio owns your soul.]

My god! How do you do it?! eek

Oh wait... i've been to your site before. You've got awesome skills. i love your drawings!! heart

[Frankie (Tre Cool)]

Wow...
WOW...
O_O
Okay, the first was good.
The second was godly.
So that means the third was far beyond anything I have ever imagined ever.
Any comments I would have posted before seeing the third were all destroyed. I was going to mention water distortion for the glass beaker, but you did. I was going to mention the dusty books look, but you did.
The only thing I have to say, other than agreeing with the thing about her eye, is that the girl on our right seems to be lacking chest definition. I don't know if it was intentional or what, but it's just not something I see too often. Also, her pointing finger seems off. Unable to tell just why, but it looks off... >_<
But it is still so awesome...

[TiffaLei]

eee thankees for the feedback! I may go back and fix the eye thing, but I'll definitely fix the cross on the girls front since it's not slanting parallel to her shoulders like it should ^^; haha She doesn't really have a chest per se, since she is about 10 yrs old and well... shouldn't really have boobs XD

I think it may be her pointing arm that has a weird attempted perspective. Maybe a bit too long or gangly or somthing... yeh, the forarm looks a bit too long. Thank you for pointing it out since now I can look for those kinds of errors!

Thanks again! I sincerely appreciate it!! I really want to get better after being inspired by such great artists around...

[Sayellow]

Great!!!! smile