sweatdrop She kind of looks...two-dimensional..Did you do this on paint, or something like that? If so, good job for that, because I can hardly draw a circle with the pencil! (I have horrible mice-drawing skills) I think though, that this outline is okay. You just really need to work on your hands and feet!! The only way to get better is to either draw your hands and feet repeatedly over and over again, or find a picture and practice different poses. whee Whee! Keep up the work!