Suggest a way to improve the AAY

[-I- S E E L E -I-]

I think you need a poofier lolita dress
And maybe have a scythe instead of that sword

[Symphoniess]

You need to trade those eyeballs for a different pair.

I can see a an icy blue working well.

[Your friend Dann]

a colorful background would accentuate your monochrome avi .

[Shin Majin]

The butterflies look really, really out of place...unless that's what you want.

[HDMI]

HDMI

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I think demon eyes would go well with your current outfit.
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[Lazarus Project]

The facelessness is off-putting to me.

[Shin Majin]

Get either a higher-tech outfit, or a lower-tech background...

[Madame Linwe]

Hm, i'm guessing since you want the book where it's at, i would suggest a green hat to balance the avatar out a little more.

[Summer Storm Dancer]

The hair sparkles and the hears kinda interfere with each other, but other than that it looks great. smile

[DarkSune]

maybe a different skintone, or intricate braided updo to match the steampunk theme

[Shin Majin]

Get a more subdued hair color. It clashes with your horsiness terribly.

[Kuro the Rookie Kingpin]

Maybe use a foresty or library background? It looks too plain. o:

[Pure T0rture]

Perhaps a plush or some form of cute companion creature at your feet, to make it less top heavy?

[SavageLamb]

I'd like to see more sky blue on her, like a coat or vest

[Archiduquesa Akako]

Hmm I say.. perhaps something more expressive? Like to show how frustrated he must be for that one misstep - with a Manners expression item.