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To me bella was written as just a normal perhaps somewhat bored with her life type of girl, possibly a little depressed.
That's the thing about reading. Everyone gets a different opinion when they read the same book. While you think she was "bored with her life", I think she was "white middle class girl complaining about everything in her life that most people might consider a good thing."
I'm not, however, trying to say that your view is "wrong", because it's no less wrong than mine is. I just looked at it differently. 3nodding
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To say that she was a cardboard cookie cutter type of person its just baffling.
Not really. Meyer herself said she was meant to be the "everyday girl", a character people could 'slip into' and 'become' in a sense. If 'anyone' could become this character, she has to be pretty nondescript, wouldn't you agree? That's one of the lures of Twilight, that you, the reader, are supposed to become Bella and live her story. If you gave Bella a description from the very beginning, she would become her own character, and Twilight would lose that lure. That covers 'cardboard'.
As for 'cookie cutter', she has pretty much the same formula as every other 'girl meets vampire and they fall in LUV~', with TONS more whiny, mopey, self-martyrdom. She also fits the description of a 'Mary Sue'. (Another definition. Note how Twilight's mentioned as a prime example.)
If you've never come across one of these literary monsters, I suggest you go diving into some bad fanfiction.
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Alot of people are like this in real life, they hardly ever smile, they are a bit depressed that their parents are split up and their mom is going off on an adventure while they have to go and live in forks of all places.
I know people who are depressed, I know people who don't really smile (although I fix that REAL QUICK. ;3), I know people who's parents split up (I'm one of them), and I know people who go off on 'adventures', although few have gone to Forks.
What I don't see, thank Sithis, is people who are willing to throw themselves off a cliff because their boyfriend of a few months left them. I don't see people going into emotional comas that last, and last, and last over their boyfriend of a few months.
Bella may be believable to you, but I find lots of her behaviors to not be realistic of an 'everyday' teenager at ALL.
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When i was reading the book I could really relate, im not that outgoing, im pale and awkward , long dark brown tangly hair.
So was I. neutral There aren't that many teenagers who don't think of themselves as 'awkward' or 'weird'. That's nothing new. And I lived in a small town in Nevada (Think of Forks with less trees and more casinos and hookers.), split up parents, I had long brown hair, was pale because I didn't like to go outside in the sand much, was awkward because I didn't have many friends....but, I still couldn't relate to Bella. Yes, I had some self-worth issues, but Bella Swan made me sick to my stomach. And when I found out I was supposed to relate to this whiny, ungrateful, mopey little trout, I wasn't thrilled. I was mortified.
How could Meyer think of her fanbase as so self-loathing that she has the main character insult herself on a daily basis?
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I thought the character was played fairly deacent, but alot of girls can play the character because it doesnt take much to act like you are bored with your life.
I agree that Bella was decently done, but I think it's because KStew didn't have much to work with. I mean, we don't even find out she has brown hair until Eclipse. It's hard to act as a character with close to nothing to go on.
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But there were parts like when she was in danger that really stick out in my mind and make me truly feel that she is a good actor.
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I love the part where he breaks her leg and she screams, it gives me chills.
I'm glad you liked parts of the movie. 3nodding
Although, as an aside, if I could make some suggestions? I was reading your post and it was a little difficult for me. sweatdrop If you could only put one space after your periods instead of two, I'd be grateful. And "a lot" is two words. 3nodding
I don't mean to offend, grammar is something I like to abide by.
1. white middle class girl complaining about her life that most people would think is a good thing, sounds like bored with her life with more detail....same thing...
2. Anyways shes a realistic character to me, because im sort of the same. Not every heroin of a book has to be strong willed, reality isnt like that there are weak women in the world who are these so called mary sues as you put it. I also think she does have personality, it may not be very interesting to you but she has some individual traits and a background story so she isnt a blank character.
3. I've been emotional about my boyfriend a few times, teenaged girls freak out about everything, are you saying that a teenager has never in their life had an emotional melt down over a guy before? Some people have even killed themselves over their boyfriends or girlfriends. Lets also get this one thing straight, she didnt jump off the cliff because she was having an emotional meltdown over her boyfriend, she jumped off because it gave her a rush, she didnt know that the current was going to be that strong and she had seen other people doing it before so in her eyes just like riding the motor cycle, it was dangerous but it wasnt going to kill her.
4.Some girls are whiney little trouts, you cant say that there isnt atleast one person who exists that isnt personality wise like that. Also she didnt have a fan base for twilight when she was writing the story, maybe she based it off someones behaviors that she knew or herself as a teenager, who knows.
5.In the first chapter after she gets into her room at her dads for the first time and before school it says
"I should be tan , sporty, blond, a volleyball player, or a cheerleader perhaps. All the things that go with living in the valley of the sun. Instead I was icory skinned, without even the excuse of blue eyes or red hair, despite the constant sunshine. I had always been slender , but soft somehow, obviously not an athlete; I didnt have the necessary hand -eye cordination to play sports without humiliating myself and harmingboth myself and anyone else who stood too close. "
So means she isnt blond and shes obviously not red haired with blue eyes. That leaves? Black or brown? Hmm what other colors do hair have? Its like that one card game where you say "Its not a man, doesnt have dark skin, doesnt have blue eyes, doesnt have blond or red hair" I think the name of the game was guess who. Point being it doesnt take a ten year old to guess what color hair she has.
6. Im very sorry that you are a grammar nazi, but I have a learning disorder and im lucky to even have this much writing skill since I couldnt even read until the age of 13.