Rewriting Twilight: First chapter on Figment

bwahaha

DO IT!! >:D	41.2%	[ 198 ]
You better update this when you start typing...	7.9%	[ 38 ]
Don't do it!! We love you!	4.0%	[ 19 ]
DON'T DO IT!! We love Twilight!	8.5%	[ 41 ]
...Why are you here?	5.0%	[ 24 ]
It's a free forum D:<	4.2%	[ 20 ]
No, I mean, you're surrounded by antis who are making sense of tripe... you sure you want to be here?	2.7%	[ 13 ]
...TEAM EDWARD!! *runs off*	8.1%	[ 39 ]
This poll has been whored before I clicked the button! D:	18.5%	[ 89 ]
Total Votes:			[ 481 ]

[Destined Savior]

Alexander J Luthor

NightfallDuet

I had a co-worker who went by Isabella (her real name was really hard to say). She was pretty nice. biggrin

@Leah: Bella isabummer. xd I love it.

Luthor, are you okay? Do we need to get you therapy after this?

I dunno. ; 3; Some of those notes are so full of rage at the end. I'm surprised I had any that weren't about Laurent happy ones. ninja

*gives you pie, chocolate, alcohol or Ginger Ale, in case you're not old enough to drink, and lots of hugs* Heres you go.

[Alexander J Luthor]

NightfallDuet

*gives you pie, chocolate, alcohol or Ginger Ale, in case you're not old enough to drink, and lots of hugs* Heres you go.

*takes it all and sets up camp* X3 tee hee

[Belethiel]

So you've finished teh readings?

I can't wait to see teh writings.

*laughs at your notes*

[Alexander J Luthor]

Belethiel

So you've finished teh readings?

I can't wait to see teh writings.

*laughs at your notes*

Teh readings was loooooooong. Holy frick. I'm never reading this crap again.

[Thrun teh Longcat Hydra]

After a great battles, there should be a rainbow in the sky.

[Alexander J Luthor]

Thrun teh Longcat Hydra

After a great battles, there should be a rainbow in the sky.

lolwut? ...

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It's so crazy... It just might work!

[Astrid Tyrsen]

DO IT. You can't make it any worse! Twilight's utter crap!

[Belethiel]

Alexander J Luthor

Belethiel

So you've finished teh readings?

I can't wait to see teh writings.

*laughs at your notes*

Teh readings was loooooooong. Holy frick. I'm never reading this crap again.

Twilight wasn't that long... I read it in 3 days. xD Breaking Canon is longer.

[The Girly-Wolf]

Alexander J Luthor

TWILIGHT: Snarknotes

[awesomeness, etc.]

I hadn't noticed that you'd posted this and OH MY GOD MARRY ME.

Promise you'll have some re-write to share soon? (:

[Alexander J Luthor]

Belethiel

Twilight wasn't that long... I read it in 3 days. xD Breaking Canon is longer.

I had to stop and recouperate a few times. I think it's a bit noticeable by the fury in some of my notes.

[The Girly-Wolf]

BD was also just so boring.

Book 1: Edward and Bella have sex all the damn time.
Book 2: Wait for the Spawn to eat its way out of Bella's gut.
Book 3: Wait for the Volturi to show up and not do anything

Two thirds of the book are devoted to waiting around for the exciting s**t to happen... and then being disappointed. :

[Alexander J Luthor]

Unofficial Leah C

Alexander J Luthor

TWILIGHT: Snarknotes

[awesomeness, etc.]

I hadn't noticed that you'd posted this and OH MY GOD MARRY ME.

Promise you'll have some re-write to share soon? (:

D'aaaaaw 4laugh


I'm working on the preface. OH MY GOD I NEED HELP!! *has the sad complication of mode-switching* If I can't figure out how to describe something in less than three pages I try to draw it out into three seconds of awesome. If my drawing skills aren't up to par, I try my best to paint with words. If neither of these work I'm flung into a manga format. <<< This is where I am with the preface right now. I know exactly what I want to say, but I have no idea HOW to lay it out. ; 3;


HELP ME, GUISE!!!

[The Girly-Wolf]

Alexander J Luthor

I'm working on the preface. OH MY GOD I NEED HELP!! *has the sad complication of mode-switching* If I can't figure out how to describe something in less than three pages I try to draw it out into three seconds of awesome. If my drawing skills aren't up to par, I try my best to paint with words. If neither of these work I'm flung into a manga format. <<< This is where I am with the preface right now. I know exactly what I want to say, but I have no idea HOW to lay it out. ; 3;


HELP ME, GUISE!!!

Write it out without worrying about the length, then pare it down to where you want it?

[Alexander J Luthor]

Unofficial Leah C

Write it out without worrying about the length, then pare it down to where you want it?

It's not that easy. D: I keep switching between dialogue and premonition-type storytelling, like, every other paragraph.

[The Girly-Wolf]

Yikes. Sounds complicated. sad