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shes annoying 0.77777777777778 77.8% [ 35 ]
shut up shes wonderful 0.044444444444444 4.4% [ 2 ]
jacob 0.022222222222222 2.2% [ 1 ]
edward 0.022222222222222 2.2% [ 1 ]
o.o 0.13333333333333 13.3% [ 6 ]
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No, after a certain point Elias overpowers the story, I hadn't completely meant for that to happen, but I did intend for him to become more of a force to be reckoned with once he got his powers, but I do like how it worked out and don't intend to change it.
I wasn't suggesting you change your story. It was something that I would like to see done well somewhere along the lines. There's this series that I was sent review copies of the first two of where the hero talks himself up the way Coggy did but with less talk of what real metal, but he's so "I'm a badass" that I just can't take the books or the character seriously. I kind of want to see him develop into the character he is rather than just jumping to that.

I see.
The series has potential, but I wish that the author would focus more on the minor characters.

Are you going to post the link to your story here on Gaia?

Yeah, I can do that.
Excellent!
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Edward sparkles!


Don't we all? /sarcasm

For one thing, why would he sparkle? It's scientifically impossible unless he was a fairy of some sort or he threw body glitter on himself in hopes in attracting a pretty young girl. (Or boy, if he'll ever admit that he's gay for Jacob, but I digress.)

Another thing, are you just trolling because that's what it's beginning to look like. I mean, you're just making random accusations (aka illogical bullshit) about how Edward is better than anyone. A lot of trolls do that and yet again just like to annoy people, but that's another thing.

Just stop acting stupid and be reasonable. Though, I have no hope for you in being reasonable about anything.

My head hurts. Meh.


Ok. I shall be reasonable. They both have their pros and cons. They r both not absolutely horrible men. My opinion is Edward. How is that? That is reasonable. stare
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No, after a certain point Elias overpowers the story, I hadn't completely meant for that to happen, but I did intend for him to become more of a force to be reckoned with once he got his powers, but I do like how it worked out and don't intend to change it.
I wasn't suggesting you change your story. It was something that I would like to see done well somewhere along the lines. There's this series that I was sent review copies of the first two of where the hero talks himself up the way Coggy did but with less talk of what real metal, but he's so "I'm a badass" that I just can't take the books or the character seriously. I kind of want to see him develop into the character he is rather than just jumping to that.

I see.
The series has potential, but I wish that the author would focus more on the minor characters.

Are you going to post the link to your story here on Gaia?

Yeah, I can do that.
Excellent!

http://figment.com/books/319731-Bleeding-Harvest
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Edward sparkles!


Don't we all? /sarcasm

For one thing, why would he sparkle? It's scientifically impossible unless he was a fairy of some sort or he threw body glitter on himself in hopes in attracting a pretty young girl. (Or boy, if he'll ever admit that he's gay for Jacob, but I digress.)

Another thing, are you just trolling because that's what it's beginning to look like. I mean, you're just making random accusations (aka illogical bullshit) about how Edward is better than anyone. A lot of trolls do that and yet again just like to annoy people, but that's another thing.

Just stop acting stupid and be reasonable. Though, I have no hope for you in being reasonable about anything.

My head hurts. Meh.


Ok. I shall be reasonable. They both have their pros and cons. They r both not absolutely horrible men. My opinion is Edward. How is that? That is reasonable. stare
No, your opinion is being hypocritical and shallow.
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Edward sparkles!


Don't we all? /sarcasm

For one thing, why would he sparkle? It's scientifically impossible unless he was a fairy of some sort or he threw body glitter on himself in hopes in attracting a pretty young girl. (Or boy, if he'll ever admit that he's gay

Another thing, are you just trolling because that's what it's beginning to look like. I mean, you're just making random accusations (aka illogical bullshit) about how Edward is better than anyone. A lot of trolls do that and yet again just like to annoy people, but that's another thing.

Just stop acting stupid and be reasonable. rolleyes rolleyes Though, I have no hope for you in being reasonable about anything.

My head hurts. Meh.


Ok. I shall be reasonable. They both have their pros and cons. They r both not absolutely horrible men. My opinion is Edward. How is that? That is reasonable. stare
No, your opinion is being hypocritical and shallow.


Whatever. Your not worth it.
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Edward sparkles!


Don't we all? /sarcasm

For one thing, why would he sparkle? It's scientifically impossible unless he was a fairy of some sort or he threw body glitter on himself in hopes in attracting a pretty young girl. (Or boy, if he'll ever admit that he's gay

Another thing, are you just trolling because that's what it's beginning to look like. I mean, you're just making random accusations (aka illogical bullshit) about how Edward is better than anyone. A lot of trolls do that and yet again just like to annoy people, but that's another thing.

Just stop acting stupid and be reasonable. rolleyes rolleyes Though, I have no hope for you in being reasonable about anything.

My head hurts. Meh.


Ok. I shall be reasonable. They both have their pros and cons. They r both not absolutely horrible men. My opinion is Edward. How is that? That is reasonable. stare
No, your opinion is being hypocritical and shallow.


Whatever. Your not worth it.
"You're" not "your".
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I see.
The series has potential, but I wish that the author would focus more on the minor characters.

Are you going to post the link to your story here on Gaia?

Yeah, I can do that.
Excellent!

http://figment.com/books/319731-Bleeding-Harvest
Excellent, I'm going to start reading now.
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I see.
The series has potential, but I wish that the author would focus more on the minor characters.

Are you going to post the link to your story here on Gaia?

Yeah, I can do that.
Excellent!

http://figment.com/books/319731-Bleeding-Harvest
Excellent, I'm going to start reading now.

Okay
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Yeah, I can do that.
Excellent!

http://figment.com/books/319731-Bleeding-Harvest
Excellent, I'm going to start reading now.

Okay
I'm also trying to figure out why they have links for the new game but there's nothing to do with it yet.
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Yeah, I can do that.
Excellent!

http://figment.com/books/319731-Bleeding-Harvest
Excellent, I'm going to start reading now.

Okay
I'm also trying to figure out why they have links for the new game but there's nothing to do with it yet.

Hmm.
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Excellent, I'm going to start reading now.

Okay
I'm also trying to figure out why they have links for the new game but there's nothing to do with it yet.

Hmm.
Bleeding Harvest's story seems pretty good so far, though you might want to make it more obvious when you switch characters. I had a few moments of confusion when the narrator started referring to themself in the third person.
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Excellent, I'm going to start reading now.

Okay
I'm also trying to figure out why they have links for the new game but there's nothing to do with it yet.

Hmm.
Bleeding Harvest's story seems pretty good so far, though you might want to make it more obvious when you switch characters. I had a few moments of confusion when the narrator started referring to themself in the third person.

Well, that's how it is, though as we get more into it I stay with first person though still switching who is talking.
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In both the book and the movie Bella was annoying, whiny, and ungrateful.
They just made it worse by casting Kristen Stewart. Bleck
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In both the book and the movie Bella was annoying, whiny, and ungrateful.
They just made it worse by casting Kristen Stewart. Bleck
Nah, Kristen's perfect for the part. It doesn't take much emotion to play the part, so she can remain blank in her expression and capture Bella's essence by doing this => neutral <= all the time.
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In both the book and the movie Bella was annoying, whiny, and ungrateful.
They just made it worse by casting Kristen Stewart. Bleck
Nah, Kristen's perfect for the part. It doesn't take much emotion to play the part, so she can remain blank in her expression and capture Bella's essence by doing this => neutral <= all the time.

lol. Well that is certainly true.

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