Poetry knowlege needed..

[Kamaraja]

I'll make one up just for you.

It suits what I'm going through now anyway..


Deceptive love. by me! cool

I'm nowhere to be found
Not beside you to whisper any sound
I'm here as a lost person
Sick, demented and troublesome
Of thinking I'm in love
When I was swept away
By the deceptive colors above
Could this be weakness?
Will it in the long run bring me happiness?
Or will this feeling I seek stay?
I'm not sure anymore
Like how I was before
When I was standing tall
Knowing I have both feet on the ground not to fall
Or is my blindness my weakness?
Where deception sneaks in to cause sadness
I thought it came from the heart
The one that stays, never falling apart
Or am I lost?
At what cost?
To know I am weak
To know if this love I seek
Is real or not.

[Intimate.snatch.]

Intimate.snatch.

The Haunter of the Dark

I always find poe to be...overrated.

Heres two, One by T.S Eliot, Called:
One of my favs, it's about those who didn't have enough strength of chararcter to matter and so are damned neither to hell or heaven, but limbo. These people are empty inside during life, lacking in purpose and without the will to find or create one.

The Hollow Men

A penny for the Old Guy

I

We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats' feet over broken glass
In our dry cellar

Shape without form, shade without colour,
Paralysed force, gesture without motion;

Those who have crossed
With direct eyes, to death's other Kingdom
Remember us--if at all--not as lost
Violent souls, but only
As the hollow men
The stuffed men.


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Hmm.. I like it, but I have to analyze these bastards, so I'm going to take a shorter one, unless nothing esle is avalible, thanks though. ;D

I'm taking it! Well, the first part anyway, screw my teacher. :3
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P.S. the check is in the mail.