TekTek me for 100k [Closed, Winner chosen!]

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RantingRachel

Asian Panda6248

I've given up on that first one, sorry. /:
And as for the second one, take of the wench item and add some more gray to it.
I love those shoes and socks and hair. o:
<3

This Better?

[RantingRachel]

Asian Panda6248

RantingRachel

Asian Panda6248

I've given up on that first one, sorry. /:
And as for the second one, take of the wench item and add some more gray to it.
I love those shoes and socks and hair. o:
<3

This Better?

Take off that Wench item again, and add maybe Ode to the Studio killer hat? :3
Then I think it'll be perfect. <3
I like the badass quality to it.

[c4stle]

RantingRachel

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RantingRachel

Asian Panda6248

RantingRachel

Asian Panda6248

I've given up on that first one, sorry. /:
And as for the second one, take of the wench item and add some more gray to it.
I love those shoes and socks and hair. o:
<3

This Better?

Take off that Wench item again, and add maybe Ode to the Studio killer hat? :3
Then I think it'll be perfect. <3
I like the badass quality to it.

This Better?

[Boojib]

better?

[Lydia the English Major]

Total Value: 1,813,000 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
May Birthstone Cape
Emerald Silver Princess Tiara
Winter Rose
Le Carousel
Custom Cut

[RainbowLightro]

RantingRachel

hope ya like it

[RantingRachel]

Asian Panda6248

RantingRachel

Asian Panda6248

RantingRachel

Asian Panda6248

I've given up on that first one, sorry. /:
And as for the second one, take of the wench item and add some more gray to it.
I love those shoes and socks and hair. o:
<3

This Better?

Take off that Wench item again, and add maybe Ode to the Studio killer hat? :3
Then I think it'll be perfect. <3
I like the badass quality to it.

This Better?

Love it, adding to favorites.

[RantingRachel]

Boojib

better?

Much better, adding it to favorites.

[RantingRachel]

I know the title says closed, but I mean closed to new submissions. talk2hand

Anyway, I'm going to go through all of my favorites and giving everyone a tip on how they can improve upon their avatars. You all have until the 18th to submit your new, editted version. You may only submit each avatar once, and if I like it better than the original, I will replace it. If I don't, I will keep your original in my favorites. You do not have to edit it, it's just recommended. Editting it does not gaurantee that you will win, and not editting it won't gaurantee that you'll lose.

Also, please PM me your editted version, I don't want to keep bumping this essentially closed thread. I will reply and let you know if I'm keeping it or not, no feedback, no re-edits.

Here we go!!

II PoisonDeath II

First: Maybe somehow make it cheaper, but keep as much of the more significant items as you can?? o:
Second: Try out some different lips? Maybe those black ones? Just to make it cheaper, really, because I really like the lips on it now. And take off that earring, I can hardly see it and it's, like, 200k.
Third: I don't know if Alruna's Rose is, like, wicked inflated or something, but it costs my entire price limit all in itself. D: Either play with the other items and try and bring it closer to at least 5mil or replace Alruna. Oh, and get rid of that stick thingy she's holding. gonk

N A R U lllll

Change the gloves to different white gloves that are cheaper and match the other whites better?

Ms Amy-Chan

Maybe add a little somethin' somethin' black to the head? :3

Admiral Absurd

Add black tennis socks or something to the feet?

DreamInfinitely

First: See if maybe you can add something that same cool shade of blue as the vest and socks to the head?
Second: Maybe something silver near the feet?

nikkibear x3

First: Replace those bracelets? And maybe get rid of Rosa Romance?
Second: Replace the socks/stockings?
Third: Put something that coppery/brassy/browny color near the feet (if there is even a possible item for that) And put on Le Carousel eyes.

zombriel

First: Add black heartstring somewhere. It fits this avatar very well.
Second: I can't really think of anything... gonk

caricat3r

The torso is too crowded.

Moxni

First: Get rid of or replace the wench item, as well as Summer Bride?
Second: I don't know how I missed this before, but you used 3 of the same items. Only use one of that item on it, please. Replace or remove the others.
Third: Get rid of the shoulder thing, get rid of the glitzy headband, and add something silvery (to match the anklets) to the head?

Zakerina

I can't really think of anything, good job! xD

Pancakes-Follower

Add my chihuahua! > biggrin

Asian Panda

1pvyzjd8:14="Asian Panda6248]

See if there is gray gloves or a belt or something you can add to put gray in that general area.

Boojib

Different black gloves and different eyes? Choose wisely on the eyes, you only get this one chance.



I will largely be looking at price!! The cheaper, the better!
Under 4mil most preferable!


Thank you all for trying so hard to please my picky butt!
And I hope you all had a very good Valentine's Day. 3nodding

[caricat3r]

RantingRachel

caricat3r

The torso is too crowded.

Is this better?

[Moxni]

RantingRachel

[Boojib]

Im not sure if this is good enough, but here

[DreamInfinitely]

Thank you <3