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kittyuu

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Good start!
I like the whip that you have added,and the leg item.
The mouth doesnt seem to fit, maybe use an item.
The crown on the head matches nicely however it doesnt seem to fit the theme.
And see if you can use more items that are not all in my invo, I would like to see more new items.

Went back and edited it a little bit
I couldn't find a hand item that matched the over all theme; sorry ;-;
And the item makes it look a /little/ more punk than carnival or jester
The avi however is still yours if you change your mind~~

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maybe these would add some color~? heart

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Went back and edited it a little bit
I couldn't find a hand item that matched the over all theme; sorry ;-;
And the item makes it look a /little/ more punk than carnival or jester
The avi however is still yours if you change your mind~~

The avi is looking much better!
See if you can maybe find a different hat
Other than that it is lovely

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The big bow seems a bit bulky on the head on both avis,
Maybe find a smaller item that is either blue or yellow to place on the head.
Other than that the avi is looking great! smile

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Good start! I like the shoes and belt.
I would like to see some new items outside of my inventory
The mask, kottan bell looks a bit out of place.
It looks a bit simple as well.

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