Haha, you're right, it is teetering on cutesy. The hair does kind of make or break this one, and I'm not sure if it's quite right. I'm not sure what exactly you're missing though- best bet is to increase badass levels when in doubt. Cool style, but it does feel like it's missing some things.
This avatar is for the Main Contest. I hope you find an avatar you like, also I stalked Sandy21 here.
I went for a Fancy look in this avatar. Also this should be my only Entry in this since I don't feel like making many more TekTeks. Now, to go get ready for a Family Reunion. ~