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- Posted: Thu, 29 Mar 2012 23:56:43 +0000
AngelicWings24
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Frilled Black Top
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Little Lucie
Petal Professor Hana
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Cream Juvenile Delinquent Shirt
X_X Yellow Raving Goggles
Demonic Anklets
Little Lucie
Petal Professor Hana
Black Fishnet Stockings
The Watchmaker
Gold Pocket Watch
Worn Leather Rivet Heels
Noel's Gift
Brown Field Cap
Nautilus Raiment
Well, I changed the hair to brown and longer like you said. Um, I wasn't sure what you would like with a different shirt, so I made one black (since there's a lot of black in the outfit) and another cream (I was trying to match the detailing in the skirt and shoes).
Oh, and I forgot to say that everything should definitely layer - they're all on different layers.
Well, this new hair actually clashes with the brown more than the blonde did, I think, so maybe stick with the first hair, or find a new one if you can. I don't really like the cream, since it looks more like another shade of yellow when paired with the yellows and browns. The black is okay, although I actually liked the white better. Did you try just spreading a little more white around? I think that would look the best. Maybe a white hair? Although I'm not sure how that would look.
And for the layering, did you check in the avatar, or are you just guessing? Because it's happened too many times where I've thought something would layer and it didn't and messed the whole thing up. If you don't want to check though, thats fine, I'll check everyone's at the end when I decide the winner. Although, at that point, it will be too late to change it if it doesnt work.