A Twin's Wish: A Dream Avi- 15k Prize

[Bubbly Fanatic]

Kumatora-san

twinwishes

How's this?

It's really cute. c:
Now, time for the critque!
The shades of pink need to match. The hair, eyes, and bracelet need to match with the rest of the avatar. I don't really like the vintage neck thingy. Switch it into a pink necklace or pendant. Can you add in the Silver Sprite anklets? The blush on the avi is a bit too harsh, can you remove that, too? And I don't really like the bloomers.
Try again? c:

[Bubbly Fanatic]

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Quote this c:

Quoted! emotion_yatta
Hi! I tried to make you a tektek...

Hope it turned out okay~
Feedback?? emotion_bigheart emotion_bigheart

I don't like the white and cream blend in. The tiny bit of purple and the red eyes are kinda random. There should be more colors besides pink on the legs and feet, too. The glasses should be pink (or some other color), too. Try again?

Sure~
Here?

emotion_bigheart feedback? emotion_bigheart

It's getting better c:
The hair is innocent, but I feel like the color just doesn't match with the rest of the outfit.
Remove the pink baby bow accessory and replace it with something else that's pink. If needed, also remove the meido headband.
The legs seem a little bare (socks, legwarmers?)
The waist should have more pink in it.
And the shade of brown of the shirt doesn't match with the skirt. (I recommend to change the skirt though)
Blush would look nice in this avatar. c:

[lisanne123]

twinwishes

neliel_espada_number_3

twinwishes

Quote this c:

how bout this?

Total Value: 662,088 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Soft Pink Decora Dress Shoes
Stupendous Strawberry
Strawberry Charlotte
Strawberry Shortcake Queen of Cups
Little Lucie
Pink Big Giant Glasses

Yesh! Strawberries <3!
So, the glasses are nice, but I'm not sure if the pink matches. Remove the big strawberry (even though I love it) cause it looks a little too.... bulky (?) in the avi. Change the eyes and put something on the head. No mouths please! And the avatar's clothes are a bit simple. Maybe a little bit of layering?

sure but um how am i supposed to go back without having to start over again to fix things?

[Bubbly Fanatic]

neliel_espada_number_3

twinwishes

neliel_espada_number_3

twinwishes

Quote this c:

how bout this?

Total Value: 662,088 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Soft Pink Decora Dress Shoes
Stupendous Strawberry
Strawberry Charlotte
Strawberry Shortcake Queen of Cups
Little Lucie
Pink Big Giant Glasses

Yesh! Strawberries <3!
So, the glasses are nice, but I'm not sure if the pink matches. Remove the big strawberry (even though I love it) cause it looks a little too.... bulky (?) in the avi. Change the eyes and put something on the head. No mouths please! And the avatar's clothes are a bit simple. Maybe a little bit of layering?

sure but um how am i supposed to go back without having to start over again to fix things?

Go to any posts with the avi you created. In this case, your first post, wherever I replied, etc.
Just click on the avatar and it will open a link. It'll say stuff like WARNING: and other stuff. Just click on the blue link and it will lead you to your avatar. Click Edit and you can fix whatever you need.

[sqoobie]

twinwishes

I didn't realize the shades didn't match, my computer makes all the shades look similar.
Is this better?

[totopikaro]

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Quote this c:

Quoted! emotion_yatta
Hi! I tried to make you a tektek...

Hope it turned out okay~
Feedback?? emotion_bigheart emotion_bigheart

I don't like the white and cream blend in. The tiny bit of purple and the red eyes are kinda random. There should be more colors besides pink on the legs and feet, too. The glasses should be pink (or some other color), too. Try again?

Sure~
Here?

emotion_bigheart feedback? emotion_bigheart

It's getting better c:
The hair is innocent, but I feel like the color just doesn't match with the rest of the outfit.
Remove the pink baby bow accessory and replace it with something else that's pink. If needed, also remove the meido headband.
The legs seem a little bare (socks, legwarmers?)
The waist should have more pink in it.
And the shade of brown of the shirt doesn't match with the skirt. (I recommend to change the skirt though)
Blush would look nice in this avatar. c:

YaY!!

Sorry, blush doesn't fit in your budget...

[Bubbly Fanatic]

Kumatora-san

twinwishes

I didn't realize the shades didn't match, my computer makes all the shades look similar.
Is this better?

Remove the necklace and the bracelets. Change the hair (PLEASE!)
Instead, use white porcelin gloves.
Try that please c:

[Bubbly Fanatic]

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Quote this c:

Quoted! emotion_yatta
Hi! I tried to make you a tektek...

Hope it turned out okay~
Feedback?? emotion_bigheart emotion_bigheart

I don't like the white and cream blend in. The tiny bit of purple and the red eyes are kinda random. There should be more colors besides pink on the legs and feet, too. The glasses should be pink (or some other color), too. Try again?

Sure~
Here?

emotion_bigheart feedback? emotion_bigheart

It's getting better c:
The hair is innocent, but I feel like the color just doesn't match with the rest of the outfit.
Remove the pink baby bow accessory and replace it with something else that's pink. If needed, also remove the meido headband.
The legs seem a little bare (socks, legwarmers?)
The waist should have more pink in it.
And the shade of brown of the shirt doesn't match with the skirt. (I recommend to change the skirt though)
Blush would look nice in this avatar. c:

YaY!!

Sorry, blush doesn't fit in your budget...

I really like it!
But I feel like something is missing. A hat? A background (like petals or sparkles)? Dunno

[sqoobie]

twinwishes

I realize it's over the limit, but I think Compass can go at a lower price.

[totopikaro]

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

I don't like the white and cream blend in. The tiny bit of purple and the red eyes are kinda random. There should be more colors besides pink on the legs and feet, too. The glasses should be pink (or some other color), too. Try again?

Sure~
Here?

emotion_bigheart feedback? emotion_bigheart

It's getting better c:
The hair is innocent, but I feel like the color just doesn't match with the rest of the outfit.
Remove the pink baby bow accessory and replace it with something else that's pink. If needed, also remove the meido headband.
The legs seem a little bare (socks, legwarmers?)
The waist should have more pink in it.
And the shade of brown of the shirt doesn't match with the skirt. (I recommend to change the skirt though)
Blush would look nice in this avatar. c:

YaY!!

Sorry, blush doesn't fit in your budget...

I really like it!
But I feel like something is missing. A hat? A background (like petals or sparkles)? Dunno

So Close!!
I tried with petals and this seemed to be the cheapest, but it slightly goes over the limit...

[honnieh bee]

Total Value: 859,900 Gold
After Exclusions: 729,900 Gold

How this hunny bunny♥

[Bubbly Fanatic]

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

Rnot-jkD

twinwishes

I don't like the white and cream blend in. The tiny bit of purple and the red eyes are kinda random. There should be more colors besides pink on the legs and feet, too. The glasses should be pink (or some other color), too. Try again?

Sure~
Here?

emotion_bigheart feedback? emotion_bigheart

It's getting better c:
The hair is innocent, but I feel like the color just doesn't match with the rest of the outfit.
Remove the pink baby bow accessory and replace it with something else that's pink. If needed, also remove the meido headband.
The legs seem a little bare (socks, legwarmers?)
The waist should have more pink in it.
And the shade of brown of the shirt doesn't match with the skirt. (I recommend to change the skirt though)
Blush would look nice in this avatar. c:

YaY!!

Sorry, blush doesn't fit in your budget...

I really like it!
But I feel like something is missing. A hat? A background (like petals or sparkles)? Dunno

So Close!!
I tried with petals and this seemed to be the cheapest, but it slightly goes over the limit...

Change the hair to Girl's Sidebun Blonde (Lite)
Add in Sweet Charming Blush
Add in Cherry Blossom (Petal Shower)
Try that please? c:

[Bubbly Fanatic]

Kumatora-san

twinwishes

I realize it's over the limit, but I think Compass can go at a lower price.

How low do you think the Compass could go?

Change the hair to Rosamund's Revenge (Powdered Court Coiffure)
Remove the glasses
Add Sweet Charming Blush, October Birthstone Cape, and April Birthstone Anklets.

Try that please? c:

[Bubbly Fanatic]

X-AvoKittyKat-X

Total Value: 859,900 Gold
After Exclusions: 729,900 Gold

How this hunny bunny♥

I really like what you have so far c:
Change the hair into Juno's lace, please c:
And change the color of the gloves
Blush would look great on this avatar
Try that? c:

[starjolras]