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well from what i see everyone is using Pink sooo... I will stand out OwO

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OwO theyre cute but I can Amp it up if youd like


Lol, great job standing out c:
For the first one, get rid of the collar and replace it with a more "femine" necklace (maybe a pendant or something?) Can you change the hair and eyes, too?

For the second one, I like how you went with a theme. But I'm not a huge fan of maids (Yeah, I suck at stuff like cosplay >///< wink Also, the cream and white are a bit scattered. Stick with only one of them. Change the hair and eyes for this one, too. Try again? c:

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OwO as requested I made the first betters User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

Im also throwing in a couple more i think you might like.

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Almost there!
No mouth please! Unless you're going to used Strawberry Sundae or something.
The hair is still bugging me :c
Change the gloves (maybe the lace porcelin thingy) and get rid of the rose.
Put on a necklace or pendant, too.
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Please put on a hair accessory!


Foo. I forgot to critque the others.
The first one: It isn't bad. The eyes STILL bug me :c and the dress looks a bit puffy, maybe use the cuffs or shoes instead. With the headphones, can you put on another hair accessory?
And blush is always appreciated c:

The second one: I love music c: So that's good.
I don't like the eyes or the headphones (Replace it with another hair accessory). Could you change that hair into a wig? If not, change the style and color (maybe black?) Put on a necklace, too. Again, blush is always appreciated c:
Especially with such a classic look
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Just a few changes. I see how you are trying to match the light blue and dark blue of the star headpiece, but it's just too contrasting. Remove the star and add in a lighter, pastel blue hair accessory. The legwarmers look a bit bulky in the avi. Can you change it into a different set of legwarmers? And instead of using the silver laurels, how about using Silver Spirit since I already own it? But I really like what you started c:

Btw, your avatar is AMAZING c:
Pink. There's nothing wrong with it c:

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Do they have the same legwarmers in pastel blue? If so, USE THEM biggrin
Remove the neck bow and but on a blue necklace or pendant instead.
I think that's about it c:

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There is no legwarmers in pastel blue.

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Just change that neckbow into a necklace or pendant and I think it might become a fav c:
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I really really like this avatar c:
Just a few changes. I see how you are trying to match the light blue and dark blue of the star headpiece, but it's just too contrasting. Remove the star and add in a lighter, pastel blue hair accessory. The legwarmers look a bit bulky in the avi. Can you change it into a different set of legwarmers? And instead of using the silver laurels, how about using Silver Spirit since I already own it? But I really like what you started c:

Btw, your avatar is AMAZING c:
Pink. There's nothing wrong with it c:

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Getting even better c:
Do they have the same legwarmers in pastel blue? If so, USE THEM biggrin
Remove the neck bow and but on a blue necklace or pendant instead.
I think that's about it c:

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There is no legwarmers in pastel blue.

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Just change that neckbow into a necklace or pendant and I think it might become a fav c:

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I really really like this avatar c:
Just a few changes. I see how you are trying to match the light blue and dark blue of the star headpiece, but it's just too contrasting. Remove the star and add in a lighter, pastel blue hair accessory. The legwarmers look a bit bulky in the avi. Can you change it into a different set of legwarmers? And instead of using the silver laurels, how about using Silver Spirit since I already own it? But I really like what you started c:

Btw, your avatar is AMAZING c:
Pink. There's nothing wrong with it c:

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Getting even better c:
Do they have the same legwarmers in pastel blue? If so, USE THEM biggrin
Remove the neck bow and but on a blue necklace or pendant instead.
I think that's about it c:

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There is no legwarmers in pastel blue.

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Just change that neckbow into a necklace or pendant and I think it might become a fav c:

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Hmmm... Suggestion time!
Instead of using Juno's Lace for the hair, use Ithllydyn Armor
For the necklace, just use Ritzy White Pearl Necklace
And for the headpiece, just use Silver Laurels.
Now, if I did my math correctly, this should keep the avi in my budget.
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I don't like the white and cream blend in. The tiny bit of purple and the red eyes are kinda random. There should be more colors besides pink on the legs and feet, too. The glasses should be pink (or some other color), too. Try again?
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Hmmm... Suggestion time!
Instead of using Juno's Lace for the hair, use Ithllydyn Armor
For the necklace, just use Ritzy White Pearl Necklace
And for the headpiece, just use Silver Laurels.
Now, if I did my math correctly, this should keep the avi in my budget.


xD ithildin armor.... thats the first one I used before changing my mind =3= Im so dumb

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OwO I tried my best. User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.


Hmmm... Suggestion time!
Instead of using Juno's Lace for the hair, use Ithllydyn Armor
For the necklace, just use Ritzy White Pearl Necklace
And for the headpiece, just use Silver Laurels.
Now, if I did my math correctly, this should keep the avi in my budget.


xD ithildin armor.... thats the first one I used before changing my mind =3= Im so dumb

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Remove the glasses and it just might be a fav c:
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I don't like the white and cream blend in. The tiny bit of purple and the red eyes are kinda random. There should be more colors besides pink on the legs and feet, too. The glasses should be pink (or some other color), too. Try again?

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