Review my guild please?

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The Kings Men
Been working on an old guild project that I've left in the virtual closet for too long.
Basically a super human RP guild. I like it so far, but I would like some outside opinions before finish setting up and open.

What do you think of the back story?
Is it easy to work with for people who are jumping on board?
Any other changes or ideas you think might work better?
Basically any suggestions?

Thanks for any advice.

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Still adding bits and pieces.
If anyones interested in joining, just post and I'll send you an invite when everything is ready.