Ashandriel
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- Posted: Thu, 05 Nov 2009 01:14:41 +0000
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx- xxxx▶ ▷ {{ In The End --
This was an experimental poem in second person that I wrote for my creative writing class.
"would you get all dolled up for him?
you say yes,
but I don’t think you would
if he asked you,
knees weak,
hands shaking
would you say yes?
you reply, sure
and fair enough,
you would
but would you get all dolled up for him?
stop
hold your tongue
for the answer is simply' no'
you wouldn’t get all dolled up for him
because he means nothing to you"
▶ ▷ {{ Remembrance --
This was a follow-up poem to In The End, requested by several members of my creative writing class.
"It’s on the tip of your tongue,
The edge of your mind
And you’re trying —
Trying to remember
The curve of her jaw,
The shape of her smile
The way her hair falls in her face when she concentrates
But you can’t
Because it’s been too long
You’ll never remember it now
You’ll have to move on
‘Cause somehow you know
You’ll never see her again"
▶ ▷ {{ Crossroads --
This was a piece commissioned by Mevioanna.
"You stand in the middle
Rusted signposts point in every direction
You stare, but you can’t read the words
It probably wouldn’t help anyway.
To your left, a paved road
Extending into the distance
As far as your eyes can see
You figure it’s a safe bet,
This path, so straight and true
And yet, you look longingly to the right
Standing, searching for the missing piece
A growth so dense you can hardly see the way
And mountains – beautifully dangerous mountains
Inviting, calling out to you
But you turn away, staring straight ahead
You’re not sure where to go,
And there’s no one around you to turn to
You know you’re on your own with this one
Forced to stand forever at these crossroads
Doomed to make this same impossible choice again
You fall to your knees and
In the name of Heaven, Hell, and anything else you can think of
Hope that you’ve made the right one
We’re forced to stand forever at these crossroads
Doomed to make this same impossible choice again"