Ashandriel
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Post: 55930065_1 created on Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:14 amPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:14 am
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This was an experimental poem in second person that I wrote for my creative writing class. "would you get all dolled up for him? you say yes, but I don’t think you would if he asked you, knees weak, hands shaking would you say yes? you reply, sure and fair enough, you would but would you get all dolled up for him? stop hold your tongue for the answer is simply' no' you wouldn’t get all dolled up for him because he means nothing to you" ▶ ▷ {{ Remembrance -- This was a follow-up poem to In The End, requested by several members of my creative writing class. "It’s on the tip of your tongue, The edge of your mind And you’re trying — Trying to remember The curve of her jaw, The shape of her smile The way her hair falls in her face when she concentrates But you can’t Because it’s been too long You’ll never remember it now You’ll have to move on ‘Cause somehow you know You’ll never see her again" ▶ ▷ {{ Crossroads -- This was a piece commissioned by Mevioanna. "You stand in the middle Rusted signposts point in every direction You stare, but you can’t read the words It probably wouldn’t help anyway. To your left, a paved road Extending into the distance As far as your eyes can see You figure it’s a safe bet, This path, so straight and true And yet, you look longingly to the right Standing, searching for the missing piece A growth so dense you can hardly see the way And mountains – beautifully dangerous mountains Inviting, calling out to you But you turn away, staring straight ahead You’re not sure where to go, And there’s no one around you to turn to You know you’re on your own with this one Forced to stand forever at these crossroads Doomed to make this same impossible choice again You fall to your knees and In the name of Heaven, Hell, and anything else you can think of Hope that you’ve made the right one We’re forced to stand forever at these crossroads Doomed to make this same impossible choice again" |
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