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Post: 96190163_1 created on Thu, 05 Mar 2015 21:01:32 +0000
Posted: Thu, 05 Mar 2015 21:01:32 +0000

Im working on something here for a thing im working on...
... Its just a WIP now. there's potential here, but I need motivation here guys. emotion_donotwant
so just tell me what you think.
a "looks great!" will do but if you wanna say "IT LOOKS LIKE POOP FROM A BEAVER'S RECTAL CAVITY" than that's better than nothing.

.. In all honesty I'm just thirsty to show off my arts. emotion_awesome

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Post: 96190163_3 created on Fri, 06 Mar 2015 03:03:38 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Mar 2015 03:03:38 +0000

That is absolutely adorable !!!
Amazing body proportions and energy ! Did you teach yourself to draw?

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Post: 96190163_4 created on Fri, 06 Mar 2015 04:53:21 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Mar 2015 04:53:21 +0000

i would say it's pretty good but what is it for? It kind of reminds me of alvin and the chipmunks to be honest.

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Post: 96190163_5 created on Fri, 06 Mar 2015 18:24:00 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Mar 2015 18:24:00 +0000

I love it to death.
Only thing I would suggest is fixing her crotch area, it's a bit low. smile

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Post: 96190163_6 created on Sat, 07 Mar 2015 17:54:51 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Mar 2015 17:54:51 +0000

Its super cute! heart

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Post: 96190163_7 created on Sun, 08 Mar 2015 04:44:22 +0000
Posted: Sun, 08 Mar 2015 04:44:22 +0000

Your line work is solid, really great energy. Though I feel that the chibi style head is disproportionate to the rest of the body. At the end of the day, all that matters is you are satisfied with the piece bcuz fuq the haters.

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Post: 96190163_8 created on Sun, 08 Mar 2015 13:47:51 +0000
Posted: Sun, 08 Mar 2015 13:47:51 +0000

A few things I noticed. What is that line at the crotch area? Is that suppose to be a small belly? If so, she shouldn't have that much of a ribcage. It needs to be more full for that type of belly line. The legs seem off. Either the feet are posed wrong for the way her legs are or her shins are posed wrong. I'm not entirely sure. Only other thing is the outstretched arm is shorter than the bent. I think the upper part is fine, but the wrist to the elbow is too short.

I really like the lines and the energy she's giving off. I hope you color this one.