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I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read my latest poem I wrote? I'm mainly looking to see what everyone thinks, and if their is any changes that need to be done.
Thank you to anyone who reads or comments!

Human Design

Flowers come in disturbing forms
Double, triple, even unlimited about of petals,
Which makes Mother Nature mourn
Over the cultivating war that has never been settled.

Just like our ‘Purebred’ dogs
With their protruding spines and lowered backs.
Dogs that would better serve as food for hogs
For Mother Nature see what they lack.

They lack what humans cannot see
With a blind eye to true design.
Thinner, smoother, hairless bodies are created for you and me
For society cannot see each individual shine.

Humans modify Mother Nature’s creations
To make monsters that spread across our nations.