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In a story that I am writing, a character is transported into an alternate dimension. Her friend is part of the ruling family in that alternate dimension, (dubbed AD) and is pulled into it purposefully. At the moment the friend is pulled into the AD they are touching, so she gets pulled along with her friend, and ends of in a strange forest in the middle of nowhere. They should have been pulled to a city, but her being in the transport when she wasn't supposed to be threw it off.
How should I write that?
How would her friend react?
Her friend has the whole "I belong here" feel, and they are both dizzy and confused from being transported to the AD.
What would you say in a situation like that? Other than where are we.
Also how should I describe the scenery from the dizzy confused P.O.V?

Thanks for the help! Also, the AD is magical, with fairies and such things, and so are they, so they have powers and such things.
Any advice on where to put that? I don't want to introduce it too soon.

One of their powers is astral projection, so, like have her get knocked up and then walk out of her body?

Sounds like you need to develop the characters and storyline a little bit more to come up with an answer.

Why would the friend feel 'homey'? How are they/what type of person are they normally?

Why do they have powers? (Both story reason and why you gave them it). At what point in the story do these powers actually come into the plot? Why would their powers suddenly come to light as they do? Do they only have powers in this dimension, or did they always have them?

Keep asking questions and try to think things through. It may help you come up with some cool ideas for the story.

The one who doesn't belong there, she, as a sort of plot twist, does, but she wasn't supposed to come to the AD so early, she was supposed to come at like, age twenty or something, but she hitched a ride on the person who was getting pulled in at the time, so I was going to have her have powers, but her friend's will be more advanced from the beginning.

The friend, I've chosen to name her Kimberley, feels like she belongs there, as she was purposefully pulled into that world, and the people who pulled her in kind of planted it in her.
She is normally very reasonable and responsible, and doesn't really act out of her normal behavioral patterns.



They have powers because they each come from a family in the AD, and in the story, their families are magic and magic is transferred by blood. I gave them the powers because the differences between which powers they received from their families creates a lot of tension, and ends up with one of the characters almost getting killed, which is very important to the story line.
Their powers aren't all that important, actually, the importance is how they got them and from which side of the family they're on.
They're powers come to light all of a sudden, because there is a certain sort of drug in the AD's atmosphere that reacts with magic and kind of brings it to the surface, and also prevents aging.
They didn't have powers before going to the AD, but if they go back at the end of the story, they will still have powers on earth.

They're here, because the magic in their blood is carried down from their human parents, so they're descended from the AD's people, who came here a long time ago, and had kids with a human.