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Teizar

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Post: 79163035_1 created on Sat, 14 Apr 2012 02:14:01 +0000
Posted: Sat, 14 Apr 2012 02:14:01 +0000

I apologize for the iffy quality, since it's a WIP I didn't scan or touch it up, and I used my phone to take a picture. I've been working on this since yesterday and I know there are things that don't look right but since I've been looking at it for so long I can't figure it out on my own.

Critiques are greatly appreciated,

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Post: 79163035_2 created on Sat, 14 Apr 2012 20:51:33 +0000
Posted: Sat, 14 Apr 2012 20:51:33 +0000

I think it looks good so far.
Maybe dragon's snout is a bit twisted.
I think his left nostril should be more on his left and down.
That's the only thing I've noticed.

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Post: 79163035_3 created on Sat, 14 Apr 2012 21:15:44 +0000
Posted: Sat, 14 Apr 2012 21:15:44 +0000

siamesse

I think it looks good so far.
Maybe dragon's snout is a bit twisted.
I think his left nostril should be more on his left and down.
That's the only thing I've noticed.

I was so busy focusing on the girl I never noticed his snout!! Now I can't unsee it haha. I will fix that for sure smile