KiTty DiaMOnd xD
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- Posted: Mon, 17 Jan 2011 22:32:26 +0000
Shaley turned around and she saw her boy friends truck driving torwards her, -FLASH- she was at a party second -FLASH- her boy friend drinking. -FLASH- shes back in the empty town,
she start to walk around she reaches a grave yard, suddenly she got a strange earge to look around in the grave yard, as she is looking around she hears breathing noises, laughter, whispering, and a annoying ringing shound it went on for about a minute and then someone or something starting to scream.
Shaley starts to pant really hard, suddenly something pushed her and she fell next to a grave
it read "Shaley Jane Roxten, Died August 16, 2011" Shaley got up really quick and she ran as fast as she could, when she got to a stopping place "her house'' as she walked inside of her house FLASH- her boy friend was driving wrecklessly he was drinking and she saw a the lights of her parents car.....
To Be Continued....
Leave a comment tell me what i should to do for Pt. 3 correct my spelling, correct my whole story if you would like.
(just no rude comments please no haters Thank You for your time.
she start to walk around she reaches a grave yard, suddenly she got a strange earge to look around in the grave yard, as she is looking around she hears breathing noises, laughter, whispering, and a annoying ringing shound it went on for about a minute and then someone or something starting to scream.
Shaley starts to pant really hard, suddenly something pushed her and she fell next to a grave
it read "Shaley Jane Roxten, Died August 16, 2011" Shaley got up really quick and she ran as fast as she could, when she got to a stopping place "her house'' as she walked inside of her house FLASH- her boy friend was driving wrecklessly he was drinking and she saw a the lights of her parents car.....
To Be Continued....
Leave a comment tell me what i should to do for Pt. 3 correct my spelling, correct my whole story if you would like.
(just no rude comments please no haters Thank You for your time.
