I would like to add a book recommendation to the list: Self-Editing for Fiction Writers. It's not a gigantic book, but it was written by two editors aiming to give writers an idea on how to improve their own works and make them more palatable. The first chapter is all about Showing versus Telling, and is probably one of the best resources I've seen that covers this.
Each chapter has exercises at the end, designed to help you pick out what is being done poorly, and asking you to attempt to correct it. It's a good read.
The amazon link for the book may be found
here.