TheBatsMeow
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- Posted: Sat, 15 May 2010 05:59:28 +0000
please attempt to ignore my horrible grammatical errors. xp thank you . I appreciate CONSTRUCTIVE criticism 3nodding
{Title}: My Escape
{Plot}: Taking place during the early 1920s in Ireland after gaining freedom from England. Ireland is rebuilding itself from a shortage of funds, replacing damaged buildings, and there being many casualties from the war. One of these casualties being Ronan’s father and with his mother’s strange disappearance soon after him being born, he has only a faint memory and a picture to remind him of his parents. With both of them gone he is forced to live with his “cold” grandparents. Later going into the house his mother lived in when she was younger but he was always forbidden to enter. Finding out this house only has one room and a small wooden box with an inscription on the back stating “I believe it is a place where gods of death play and the spiritually, mentally, or physically dead stay. Many spirits through tragedy or sin are bound to this realm and only will be seen by the living when the supernatural wall grows thin. Your strongest emotion while entering this parallel world will bear effect and if you die here, in the human world you shall also be laid to rest. In the end…here your true self will be revealed whether you’re a wretch or someone truly kind, here your fate will be sealed. ~ Dream Demon Lilith...Inside the box there is an amulet and on it is written “nothing is as it seems.”
{Title}: My Escape
{Plot}: Taking place during the early 1920s in Ireland after gaining freedom from England. Ireland is rebuilding itself from a shortage of funds, replacing damaged buildings, and there being many casualties from the war. One of these casualties being Ronan’s father and with his mother’s strange disappearance soon after him being born, he has only a faint memory and a picture to remind him of his parents. With both of them gone he is forced to live with his “cold” grandparents. Later going into the house his mother lived in when she was younger but he was always forbidden to enter. Finding out this house only has one room and a small wooden box with an inscription on the back stating “I believe it is a place where gods of death play and the spiritually, mentally, or physically dead stay. Many spirits through tragedy or sin are bound to this realm and only will be seen by the living when the supernatural wall grows thin. Your strongest emotion while entering this parallel world will bear effect and if you die here, in the human world you shall also be laid to rest. In the end…here your true self will be revealed whether you’re a wretch or someone truly kind, here your fate will be sealed. ~ Dream Demon Lilith...Inside the box there is an amulet and on it is written “nothing is as it seems.”
