FoxKin56
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- Posted: Sat, 20 Mar 2010 09:40:34 +0000
This is a story I've begun to work on, it's also on Fanfiction.net under Wonderland in a Blender by Gracie Facie, if you want to look it up (it'll be updated on there much more often than on here)
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Wonderland in a Blender
Summary: Alison Jonston, Ali for short, has always heard the story about Alice in Wonderland. However, she always dismissed it as childish folly. Wonderland is lost on her--at least, until she finds herself down the rabbit-hole.
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Chapter One: Down the Ivy-Hole
"I can't wait for it! It's going to be so great!" Eliza squealed, hugging the Alice in Wonderland poster to her chest tightly.
Ali sighed. Eliza's obsession with that old story was getting quite vexing, having been exponentially multiplied by the premiere of the Tim Burton film based on it. School had just gotten out, and they hadn't even gotten off of the grounds before Eliza had started in on it. Personally, Ali thought the story was absolutely bullocks--the man was a drug addict, nothing else. The story's usual enchantments had never ensared her in it's crazy web.
"Please, Ali? Will you please go see it with me?" Eliza pleaded, staring up at her with those big blue doe-eyes.
"But I hate that story, you know that," Ali replied, trying not to get sucked into Eliza's gaze. Eliza made a whimpering noise. Although she was seventeen, she still looked about twelve, and was a dead ringer for the Disney version of Alice, what with her long blonde hair that curled slightly and her big blue eyes. She even owned an Alice costume and wore it to school on casual Fridays.
"Oh, Ali, won't you please do it for me? I'll never bother you again, I promise! Father says it's childish, and Mother's not around to go with me. Please, Ali?"
Ali sighed. "Alright, alright. We'll go tomorrow. Just don't expect me to like it. I don't like American movies much anyways, and you can bet this won't be any different."
"Thank you, Thank you! You have no idea what this means to me!" Eliza threw her arms around Ali's neck and squeezed her tight.
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"I'm home," Ali called through the no-doubt empty hallways of her house. Mother didn't get off work until late, and her father was on a business trip in America. She tossed her bag onto the chair in the parlor and walked upstairs to her room. She changed out of her uniform and into some jeans and a Beatles T-shirt. With a sigh, she put her iPod (a gift her father had brought back from America for her last time he'd gone--as if she couldn't get it in London) into the iPod radio and listened to music while she did her homework. When "Hey, Jude" came on she hummed along, wishing for the umpteenth time that she had been able to see them in concert.
Presently, she grew overly bored of her homework and found herself staring longingly out the window, wishing that the dullness of her everyday routine would just go away. Soon, her papers and books no longer held even a shred of her interest, and she had grabbed her jacket and sketchbook and gone outside.
She breathed in the warm summer air, wondering how her parents had decided to send her to a year-round school. She longed for the three months of lazy summer afternoons that some of her friends enjoyed, wished she could explore all of London without having to worry about her studies or her teachers or learning how to sit up straight and drink tea properly. With a sigh, she collapsed against the great oak tree in her backyard and began to look around for things to draw.
Her mother's garden was, of course, quite beautiful. However, Ali's sketchbook already had numerous drawings of her mother's azaeleas and hibiscuses and sunflowers and daisies. Then there was the pond--her father had built it and filled it with koi fish. But, once again, she had drawn the pond many times. Frustrated, she looked around frantically, her eyes falling on the hole in the ivy, leading down into the little cave she and the neighbor girl, Jillian, had dug beneath the fence when they were very young. She smiled as she remembered all the things they had hidden down there, and suddenly thought that one of those things might be worth drawing.
She grabbed a lantern out of the shed and began the wander cautiously down the ivy-hole, struggling to keep her footing on the weather-worn path downward. She tried to remember the last time she'd been down there, but couldn't. How different it had all seemed back then, she thought. The lantern's glow illuminated the path, willing her onward towards the bottom.
It was after a few minutes when she began to wonder--why was it taking her so long to reach the cavern? The walk had never taken this long before. The path just seemed to wind down even further the deeper she went. Perhaps Jillian and her little brothers and sisters had taken to deepening it--after all, they didn't go to a year-round school, and had had plenty of time during their summers to do so. Had they moved all the things as well? Wait, there was something--she slowed and looked at the teddy bear on the shelf as she passed it. It seemed to wink at her. She shook it off and continued down. Surely the rest of the items were coming soon?
Sudenly, her foot caught on a root and she fell down abruptly. She braced herself to hit the dusty ground, but never felt it. With shock, she realized she was falling endlessly. she could see her lantern ahead of her, having dropped it when she tripped. it's light dissappeared and she got very confused.
"Just what in the world is going on here?" She demanded, knowing she wouldn't receive an answer. "This is ridiculous! Absolute tommyrot! When one trips, they should hit the--"
Suddenly she felt solid ground under her feet, and she came down hard, smacking into the ground with such force that she could swear she saw little birds around her head.
"Ugh, ground..." She continued deliriously She looked around her, but everything was dark. "What the devil....Where in hell's name am I?"
Let's Begin!
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Wonderland in a Blender
Summary: Alison Jonston, Ali for short, has always heard the story about Alice in Wonderland. However, she always dismissed it as childish folly. Wonderland is lost on her--at least, until she finds herself down the rabbit-hole.
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Chapter One: Down the Ivy-Hole
"I can't wait for it! It's going to be so great!" Eliza squealed, hugging the Alice in Wonderland poster to her chest tightly.
Ali sighed. Eliza's obsession with that old story was getting quite vexing, having been exponentially multiplied by the premiere of the Tim Burton film based on it. School had just gotten out, and they hadn't even gotten off of the grounds before Eliza had started in on it. Personally, Ali thought the story was absolutely bullocks--the man was a drug addict, nothing else. The story's usual enchantments had never ensared her in it's crazy web.
"Please, Ali? Will you please go see it with me?" Eliza pleaded, staring up at her with those big blue doe-eyes.
"But I hate that story, you know that," Ali replied, trying not to get sucked into Eliza's gaze. Eliza made a whimpering noise. Although she was seventeen, she still looked about twelve, and was a dead ringer for the Disney version of Alice, what with her long blonde hair that curled slightly and her big blue eyes. She even owned an Alice costume and wore it to school on casual Fridays.
"Oh, Ali, won't you please do it for me? I'll never bother you again, I promise! Father says it's childish, and Mother's not around to go with me. Please, Ali?"
Ali sighed. "Alright, alright. We'll go tomorrow. Just don't expect me to like it. I don't like American movies much anyways, and you can bet this won't be any different."
"Thank you, Thank you! You have no idea what this means to me!" Eliza threw her arms around Ali's neck and squeezed her tight.
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"I'm home," Ali called through the no-doubt empty hallways of her house. Mother didn't get off work until late, and her father was on a business trip in America. She tossed her bag onto the chair in the parlor and walked upstairs to her room. She changed out of her uniform and into some jeans and a Beatles T-shirt. With a sigh, she put her iPod (a gift her father had brought back from America for her last time he'd gone--as if she couldn't get it in London) into the iPod radio and listened to music while she did her homework. When "Hey, Jude" came on she hummed along, wishing for the umpteenth time that she had been able to see them in concert.
Presently, she grew overly bored of her homework and found herself staring longingly out the window, wishing that the dullness of her everyday routine would just go away. Soon, her papers and books no longer held even a shred of her interest, and she had grabbed her jacket and sketchbook and gone outside.
She breathed in the warm summer air, wondering how her parents had decided to send her to a year-round school. She longed for the three months of lazy summer afternoons that some of her friends enjoyed, wished she could explore all of London without having to worry about her studies or her teachers or learning how to sit up straight and drink tea properly. With a sigh, she collapsed against the great oak tree in her backyard and began to look around for things to draw.
Her mother's garden was, of course, quite beautiful. However, Ali's sketchbook already had numerous drawings of her mother's azaeleas and hibiscuses and sunflowers and daisies. Then there was the pond--her father had built it and filled it with koi fish. But, once again, she had drawn the pond many times. Frustrated, she looked around frantically, her eyes falling on the hole in the ivy, leading down into the little cave she and the neighbor girl, Jillian, had dug beneath the fence when they were very young. She smiled as she remembered all the things they had hidden down there, and suddenly thought that one of those things might be worth drawing.
She grabbed a lantern out of the shed and began the wander cautiously down the ivy-hole, struggling to keep her footing on the weather-worn path downward. She tried to remember the last time she'd been down there, but couldn't. How different it had all seemed back then, she thought. The lantern's glow illuminated the path, willing her onward towards the bottom.
It was after a few minutes when she began to wonder--why was it taking her so long to reach the cavern? The walk had never taken this long before. The path just seemed to wind down even further the deeper she went. Perhaps Jillian and her little brothers and sisters had taken to deepening it--after all, they didn't go to a year-round school, and had had plenty of time during their summers to do so. Had they moved all the things as well? Wait, there was something--she slowed and looked at the teddy bear on the shelf as she passed it. It seemed to wink at her. She shook it off and continued down. Surely the rest of the items were coming soon?
Sudenly, her foot caught on a root and she fell down abruptly. She braced herself to hit the dusty ground, but never felt it. With shock, she realized she was falling endlessly. she could see her lantern ahead of her, having dropped it when she tripped. it's light dissappeared and she got very confused.
"Just what in the world is going on here?" She demanded, knowing she wouldn't receive an answer. "This is ridiculous! Absolute tommyrot! When one trips, they should hit the--"
Suddenly she felt solid ground under her feet, and she came down hard, smacking into the ground with such force that she could swear she saw little birds around her head.
"Ugh, ground..." She continued deliriously She looked around her, but everything was dark. "What the devil....Where in hell's name am I?"