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Post: 22203267_1 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:04:32 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:04:32 +0000

Obviously its still in the sketch stage XD

What I want help on is mainly the anatomy and positioning. Do you think the way he's sitting would look good on my thigh? Answer honestly now.

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Post: 22203267_2 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:07:28 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:07:28 +0000

good anatomy, i love the wings!

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Post: 22203267_3 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:18:04 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:18:04 +0000

japanesejuicebox

good anatomy, i love the wings!

Zank you smile

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Post: 22203267_4 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:39:20 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:39:20 +0000

lolz I made a poll

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Post: 22203267_5 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:54:53 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:54:53 +0000

Do not get a tattoo of something you drew unless you are an adult and have been drawing for longer than you can remember.

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Post: 22203267_6 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:57:00 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:57:00 +0000

The right shoulder looks a bit off. Other than that it is great. Very good job with the anatomy.

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Post: 22203267_7 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:58:06 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:58:06 +0000

Saber in Blue

Do not get a tattoo of something you drew unless you are an adult and have been drawing for longer than you can remember.

Uhh, I AM an adult and I HAVE been drawing for as long as I can remember. confused

I'm drawing it myself so it'll be original and special to me

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Post: 22203267_8 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:58:28 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 01:58:28 +0000

I see nothing wrong with the anatomy.
Great job.

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Post: 22203267_9 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:00:34 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:00:34 +0000

Kemarie

The right shoulder looks a bit off. Other than that it is great. Very good job with the anatomy.

His right or ours? x.x

thanks Starry Omega!

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Post: 22203267_10 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:02:17 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:02:17 +0000

`Riian`

Saber in Blue

Do not get a tattoo of something you drew unless you are an adult and have been drawing for longer than you can remember.

Uhh, I AM an adult and I HAVE been drawing for as long as I can remember. confused

I'm drawing it myself so it'll be original and special to me

The anatomy is very simple and noncommital, particularly the pelvis and the head, and the leg is too thick and cylindrical. The bent leg doesn't have any of the proper flesh bulges, and the hand needs work. Normally I wouldn't be so harsh, but you're talking about a tattoo, man. That's serious business.

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Post: 22203267_11 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:09:18 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:09:18 +0000

Saber in Blue

`Riian`

Saber in Blue

Do not get a tattoo of something you drew unless you are an adult and have been drawing for longer than you can remember.

Uhh, I AM an adult and I HAVE been drawing for as long as I can remember. confused

I'm drawing it myself so it'll be original and special to me

Aha, that's better. Thank you for pointing things out >_< The legs I've already noticed and are fixing, and the hand is just a uber quick sketch so I'll remember how it's positioned. I'll correct everything you pointed out and repost later tonight smile

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Post: 22203267_12 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:17:28 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:17:28 +0000

I do kind of agree that you should definitely perfect it before you actually get it tattooed. Uh, I guess I would change the head/neck positioning, and possibly the face (line up the features a little more). I like the torso a lot; it seems well proportioned. Other than that, there's not much else I would crit on this. I would love to see a more finished version after you perfect it (if that's what you're planning to do)! Good luck with the tattooing... I guess it's supposed to be really painful.

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Post: 22203267_13 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:23:58 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:23:58 +0000

The wings are perfect. ^^ I can't really say anything because everything that could possibly be wrong with it. crying Darn people for getting here before me. But, of course, I'm a big fan of your work so I probably wouldn't have been much help anyway xp

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Post: 22203267_14 created on Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:35:01 +0000
Posted: Wed, 17 Jan 2007 02:35:01 +0000

OOOOh. <333 The tatoo is gorgeous even in the sketch pose.

And I love the pose. I've been trying doing a pose like that, but I never can get it right. You seemes to get it perfectly! xD I envy you and your skills!

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