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I could tell that he appreciated how well I listened to his stories of living in a mountain side. And how his parents died in a mine explosion. I cried almost every single time he told me a story. It might have been his life, or it might have been because his voice was like a birds. Beautiful, elegant, and somewhat cute. I loved him so much that I dreamed about him, I had to be and go everywhere he went. He was the perfect one. He told me about the mountain. How it shinned in the moonlight. Like a gem on the water on a sunny day. I told him about how he lit up as he fell from the sky, how he floated so elegant, and how I tried to save him from the water. He told me about this pendant he keeps in his pocket for good luck. He told me stories how his father had given it to him before he died in the explosion. It had a heart engraved in it. Inside the engraving was a billion shining blue crystals. I loved that neckless as well as him. He said it had saved him from many dangers. He told me about a mouse he had brought with him, and how it was very intellegent. I loved hearing his stories hour after hour. As he did mine. Sometimes we went on to the island in the pond to talk and tell jokes to each other. My life was more exciting with him in it. Before I had no friends, nothing. He meant everything to me. I loved him still. He still loved me. We had a connection that no one could ever break. Untill that day.....

A man named Charlie Ray came to our home that Friday night and hauled him away(for I didn't know his name). As the wagon drove off with my only love, my only friend, and only hope, he whispered to me loud enough to where I could hear it,"My name...my name is....Nilo'." As I stared at him with amazment, I wispered back to him, " My name..is..Maya. And no matter what happens in the future...you promise, you will still love, still be alive, and still tell me stories." He smiled and nodded back as the wagon rode away. I ran after it so I could just see his face one more time...but, I didn't. He turned away as he saw me chasing him. I burst into tears, I heard him yelling for me," Maya! Maya! Save me and we can be together forever!" After I heard the last of his voice, I heard a gun shot and a yell. I screamed as for they had shoten him. It has been seven months after Nilo' vanished. I saw a wagon comming and my mother yelling for me to come inside and goin the basement. I ran as fast as I could. I heard the voices above me and my mother yelling," You can't take her! She's my child and I love her!" Then..a gunshot. I dared not to scream this time for they would kill me as well. I heard the basement door shutter. I said nothing. I heard Nilo' yell for me to come out. Nilo' was captured to help the evil. I cried and whispered to him," Nilo', you promised me you would. How could you betray me like this!! I thought that we would live happy ever after!" He threw down his pendant to me. "Keep it. You'll need it." As I heard another gunshot Nilo' whispered down to me," Take care Maya." I ran up to see Nilo' shot in the leg. My mother by his side alive. He whispered to me again," Save me. That was your promise to me." It took him two weeks to heal his leg. He told me stories once agian and loved eachother still. The End.

Then nobody's fecking going to read it. Be un-lazy.

Anyway.
There is a separate subforum for original stories and prose, you know. It's at the top of the page; I don't know how you could have missed it, but you did. You will be moved, so don't recreate this there. Please do post your stories there from now on, though. Okay? Thanks. biggrin

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I read it.

Why does everyone have to be so crass, to everyone else?

Whats left of human decency and kindness?

Besides...this is an ad, and really doesn't have anythign to do with this topic. So quite honestly, people are actually being quite kind to this post.