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Hello, I just posted my first chapter of one of my novels and my preface. I am looking for as much feedback and suggestions as possible. I really respect the time and effort of anyone who is willing and interesting in reading this chapter and telling me what they feel about the story thus far, and so I am willing to pay for reviews/edits.

I kept the amount iffy on the actually page, but since I know everyone in these forums comes to get a little extra money I will try to make a quick graph.

For a review I am looking for as much suggestion as possible. This could either be explaining what you liked or hated or what you feel needs to be changed. A review will be put by the length of the comment, but also how creative and helpful it is.

Every word= 5 Gold
Bonus for how helpful I feel your review was could very between 1,000- 50,000

Edits will be based on how many errors you find, that I agree with. This mostly means grammar, spelling or tense issues as I am dyslexic and know I have an issue with those. I will not however agree with someone rewriting or changing every other word just to try to get extra money.

1 Edit = 100 gold

You can edit and give a review,

This will keep going until I either run out of money, or I am satisfied with the amount of reviews I have gotten.

Make sure to comment on this thread saying you are going to review/edit and then please place your review on the writing thread or website (if you have an account).

Thank you for your time.

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