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graphic nightmares(not sure if this goes here or lifestyle) Go to post 5 Extended Discussion Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:23 pm
heres the deal.
I have nightmares, insanely graphic nightmares.
about my boyfriend dying-hes in the army you see and hes gona be leaving soon...-
seriously these are so flipping graphic their so real when i have them I wake up sweating and crying and sometimes screaming.
the other day i was in the kitchen and I blacked out and had another dream.
is there something wrong with me?
I'm really scared I dont want these dreams to come true.
has anyone else experianced nightmares like this or does anyone else have a simular situation to me.
I'm so scared I just need someone to talk to
Alice in Wonderland-Help please? Go to post 4 Cosplay and Conventions Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:52 pm
okay lets try that again mad hatter :
http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj77/wendy199284/Cartoons/Alice In Wonderland/mad-hatter.jpg

Alice and the Mad Hatter:
http://media.photobucket.com/image/alice in wonderland/Cuhsandra09/AliceinWonderland-masterpieceeditio.jpg?o=58

white rabbit:
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww150/starr_gurl25/Alice in Wonderland/whiterabbit.jpg
Alice in Wonderland-Help please? Go to post 4 Cosplay and Conventions Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:32 am
okay this is a picture of the mad hatter from the movie (here in lies my problem my amazingly sexy boyfriend of eighteen shouldnt look old and should still look cute lol but also look like the mad hatter lol so I was tryin to figure out how to do a mellowed outish version of him because I'm not sure he'll wear bright orange and such)

http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/j...mad-hatter.jpg

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x..._94/hatter.jpg

heres alice ( i have a dress but I wanna make it that full boddied how could I do that without wearing petticoats and such underneath)
http://i719.photobucket.com/albums/w..._3icFoGoXn.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j2...rland-mv03.jpg

and the white rabbit (I need to feeeeminise this but also still have it recognisable)
http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/j...with-watch.jpg

http://i572.photobucket.com/albums/s...th-watch-5.jpg

heres some more reference pics
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f1...hiterabbit.jpg

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...d-hatter-3.jpg

http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/o...mad-hatter.jpg
Alice in Wonderland-Help please? Go to post 4 Cosplay and Conventions Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:02 am
So heres the deal
My boyfriend my and my best friend alyssa and i are going to a con together I'm gona be alice from alice in wonderland-already have the dress- and my friend is going to be the white rabbit and my luverly boyfriend is gonna be the mad hatter smile so I have tried before to make a white rabbit costume and basicly it was ONE BIG FAT EPIC PHAIL so I need some advice on how i could do that (and where the fudge i could find bunny ears!) and I am completely lost on my boyfriends cuz I dont wana make him look old (lulz) but i want him to be mad hatterish if it helps at all he already wears a top hat on a day to day basis
so thanks in advance
if you need pictures of us
or for some crazy reason have not read the epic of all epic book alice in wonderland or through the looking glass or watched the movie and need ref pics for them just message me or chat me if i'm on or comment smile thanks guys and gals
Kristen and Rob: Official? Go to post 32 Celebrities Thu Aug 13, 2009 3:33 am
GummyBear -Head Biter-
Koressa
I'm also going to question how valid this is, cause I'd figure it would be all ove the place if they were.

It's hard to believe either way since they have close to no chemistry while on screen together.

This Is everywhere! All over the covers on magazines and crap. I still Dissaprove. Hes a little old for her

I would have to disagree shes what nineteen now and hes 21 their only like two years apart and I know a couple that is ten years apart and married
F I N D I N G . L I B E R T Y - ://[a very true story] Go to post 53 Original Stories/Prose Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:09 am
I read this before when it was in your other thread and I really liked it cus I could relate in a way
I was wondering could you possibly post something on where you and Robert are now?
KISS ME: RON WEASLEY/HERMIONE GRANGER Go to post 39 Fanfiction Sun Jul 05, 2009 5:33 am
I'm not even a HP fan and I liked this!
I actually clicked this by accident rolleyes and decided to read it
I really liked how it was written visually and descriptively
is this weird?? Go to post 45 Writers Sun Jul 05, 2009 5:28 am
I don't think its weird at all
you can be whatever you want to be
the question is what should you be
what is most feesable and eficiant and not neccasarily always waht makes you happy
A different kind of star wars story(READ AND COMMENT PLEASE) Go to post 3 Fanfiction Sun Jul 05, 2009 5:14 am
PadawanCyn
Overall, it's a rather confusing little piece of writing. Try to add more description about the setting and a bit more info about what is going on, because as a reader it felt like I was dumped head-first into a very large pool with nothing to hold on to. Nothing really stood out...

In terms of grammar, you might want to check your punctuation: you're missing a lot of commas and periods, the places where you placed paragraphs are kind of weird, and some of the quotation marks need to be fixed.

I don't know what time period this story is supposed to take place in, or if you're even interested in following canon, but just for reference's sake - if you don't know it already - I'll tell you that the practice of the Jedi Order around the time of the movies was to take the Force-sensitive children to the temple as infants. So, unless your character is from some strange species with super-memory, she could never have had a recollection of her father. Also, a minor detail about your character: it seems a bit pointless and redundant to me to give her a nickname that's only one letter shorter than her actual name...

There's lots of room for improvement, so don't give up and good luck!


Actually it was also known during the time of the clone wars and after the new jedi order was established for jedi knights and master jedi to train adult padawans because of the lack of children sensative to the force. Keyan is seventeen and entering such an aprenticeship-likewise jerec is only two years older then her. This takes place just before the outbreak of the clone wars and anakins turning. She remembers her father because he was too sensative to the force but no one ever knew she was he was killed by a sith leader and the reason she is enlisting is to act out revenge (thats the reason she enlists at first) but she sees that the jedi are not about that that they are about caring and that they only use violence to promote peace and never for revenge (except in anakins case really) she ends up being I suppose indoctrinated is the word but she still ends up breaking the code because she falls in love with her master (oops xd ) and they are trying to keep it secret, I know this at the end of the story one of them will either be dead or on the dark side. Yes I do agree it has room for improvement and I thank you for your feedback. It has helped alot.
Still Painted Eyes Go to post 7 Original Stories/Prose Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:39 pm
oh my god I love it!
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