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Titles are NOT important Go to post 83 Writers Sat Aug 15, 2009 7:07 pm


Regarding titles, whether I create them before, during, or after the actual story changes. Sometimes a good title just pops into my head without much thought...and other times I end up waiting until the very end. *shrugity shrug shrug* I guess I just don't follow much a of pattern.

No way! This is really your first thread...honestly I'm flabbergasted.
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Done Go to post 2 Original Stories/Prose Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:37 pm


Please proofread. There are many grammar/spelling errors. <---Having those sort of errors has a negative effect on the 'final presentation' of this excerpt. It also allows the reader to misunderstand certain aspects of what is happening.

From such a small excerpt I'm unable to comprehend any sort of exposition leading to a main idea. So I am unable to give a proper critique regarding the course of actions taking place within the story.

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American characters with Asian names. Go to post 68 Writers Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:26 pm


Yes...when that happens it annoys the crap out of me.
I like to keep my literature and Anime/Manga obsessions separated from each other.

Edit: So yes...I suppose I WAS referring to Japanophiles who write there story as if it was an anime...with face faulting and bursting veins...I find it distasteful.
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WHO WANTS TO HELP ME WRITE A SORY!! TRUST ME IT'S FUN!!!! Go to post 32 Recycle Bin Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:21 am


"Sorry"

biggrin Yay...I helped you write a sorry...
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Dun STeel MAI Ideas!!1!!!1! Go to post 31 Writers Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:15 am
The Draken
Jaiden`
No, I think I'm in Gen Y. {I'm almost 10 years older than you guys.] Unless that stands for Generation Youtube. I never could get that straight: who's a baby boomer, who's a Gen Y'er, who's a Gen X'er.....

My sister and I are in the same generation and she's 31.

Generation Y, Echo Boomers or Millenniums
Born: 1977-1994
Coming of Age: 1998-2006
Age in 2004: 10 to 22
Current Population: 71 million

According to: http://www.socialmarketing.org/newsletter/features/generation3.htm


Generation stuff always confuses me.

That makes me generation Y....(born in '93)
Now I truly know my place in this world.

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A Little Rant. If you're easily offended, leave. Go to post 56 Writers Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:24 am


The WF is currently being invaded by N00bz and trolls of all sorts. It's up to us regulars to defend our countryForum!

There are still decent writers here...they are scarce in numbers but, yes they exist.

--> I know this is considered wrong...but nowadays I seem to be judging people by their usernames. If I see a 'lol doez u lyke mah story' posted and the OP'z name is 'HotXEMOXBunnyXGurl' I probably won't even bother...unless I have some sort of witty remark up my sleeve of course. <---Does anyone else hold such prejudices?
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crying Go to post 30 Original Poetry/Lyrics Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:18 pm


...knee slapper.
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The Story That Never Ends O.O [CLOSE] Go to post 10 Recycle Bin Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:37 am


...lol wut?

*I shrug.*
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Lord Of The Flies Go to post 22 Books Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:36 am


Personally I found it to be 'okay'...but nothing too spectacular. There was a whole lot of 'under meanings' within the text that required some thought, but the diction and use of language shouldn't kill you or anything.

--->I liked Simon the best. He needed a hug.
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