Teh-Akuma-Yoru The fanarts are great, except that Hinata's mouth looks a tad unnatural. The sketches I liked, they have a multitude of different poses, instead of the generic "hiding my hands behind me" pose. 3nodding
The expressions are good too, but the pencil you used makes their expression a bit thick. If you like that type of pencil, just try to keep the point...pointy, lol
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hisoka hxh u need a finer pencil. pirate technicoloryawn The ones that are not copies, remind me of king of the hill. very stiff and unnatural looking. keep working on it.
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A n u s Danish First off, these all seem to be clearly sighted from other drawings, which is a huge fault and is basically stealing someone elses art. People cannot critique artwork that is basically copied no matter how good your eye is. Very unoriginal.
Miku was done from the top of my head, postition and all.
The first 3 are character sketches are from a story I'm writting. But its good to know that I copied them from some other creation instead of my own head.
The 4th sketch is actually my Sites mascot well one of the 2 and the 5th sketch was derived from a request on my drwan concept of a fellow cosplayers rendition of Shiva from Final fantasty. The 6th and 7th sketches are fan arts.
http://heroaiyami.deviantart.com/
For more copied stuff.
/explinaition
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Wow... this is just wow. Ouch.
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Every little bit helps thanks Guys. Be through and constructive please.
First my Finished images:
Sketches:
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You are welcome my dear Aurora.
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Before HeroVision there was Hero's Legacy.
Starting in 2003 it began developing in one young man mind and a group of friends.
Hero's Legacy is a story during the high school years.
Situations were 'Roleplayed' and characters were developed.
Today with tough scheduals and everyone graduated the line of comunication is thin. We have developed 12 written chapters.
2005-2008 I began sketching out the characters out looks... :s an issue I have is that I cannot draw consistantly. Thus the characters always look different...
In 2007 Hero Vision was established opening its server on Rapero Rapido.
Since then many server changes had been made from MLB to HostCell, Hero Vision has struggled to maintain its user count with very little loss of data.
2009's Data Flunk D:
Hero Vision Suffered a data loss due to the stress the site was putting on a residential server. 3 months of data was lost due to human Error and Shaw's "subborness".
Shizuku & Kire
Two lovely ladies that were created from my little mind and fitted to the users of Hero Vision.
/history lesson.
:Story line and sales pitch:
Introducing Hero, a young boy with unique abilities, one thing is ceritain he isn't a normal boy, enrolled as a student in a class for the "gifted".
We meet up with his friends, family and rivals in an adventure full of magic, peril, strength, loss, friendship and trust.
He'll overcome deadly foes in a quest to find himself no... his true self, and save his friends from an evil presence shadowing over the city.
Watch him get the girl, save the damsel, and fight this nemesis in this action packed story. With Hero things are sure to never dull out.
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