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| Cromartie High School Go to post | 5 | Anime/Manga/Comics |
Fri Aug 03, 2007 2:44 am |
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| Thy story ideas. xD Go to post | 3 | Recycle Bin |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:25 am |
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Naive Seer Personally, I don't know if I would read them. Some of the ideas sound a bit cheesy like I would to have written them when I was in eighth grade. However, generally they are full of ideas and I wouldn't mind seeing your style of writing before thinking about reading it. Let me comment individually... Quote: Alright so, this one is a fantasy type. Of course. Its about magic, I should say plainly. A popular guy from school is on his way to his friends, when he comes by this house on fire. And everyone is just walking by, not even noticing the house is on fire. The guy knows whos house it is too. A quiet girl, who always keeps to herself. She is cute, but he could never date her. He enters the house, and passes out. When he wakes up, he is in a different realm. He finds two girls to explain to him where he is. Everyone there, has magical powers. Only they have a limited amount of times they can use their magic and such. So the girls explain to him how the girl who dissapeared, is the only girl with the highest number, and she never uses her magic. One of the girls, he is with, can read minds, and the other girl can control the minds of those around her, to do what she wants. Thats why the two get along so well. And not to mention are best friends. While they are on their way to find the missing girl, they come along four other people. Two boys and two girls. One girl is a neko (I was in love with nekos long ago) and the other one is a vampire(yess I know>:/). So that means there is a a vampire guy (and yes they are in love). And then there is a shape shifter guy. He can shape shift into anything, and what ever color he is, it resembles his mood. And so on and so on... This reminds me of a mix between Thomas Covenant, Animorphs and something else I can't quite put my finger on. Obviously - I don't know if I would read it. The ties between the guy and the girl sound interesting; how she has been secretly (I'm assuming) roaming a different world without anyone's knowledge and he just happens to be the guy that falls into some sort of trap. I think the part about the four other people sounds a bit too imaginary to be realistic (you want atleast parts of realism in there). If you were able to mistake the girl for a normal human being that is not queer (weird) then why over-do it with vampires and nekoes let alone shapeshifters, mind readers and mind-controllers. I think this all comes down to the types of characters they are. What is the plot? What happens? - why is he lured into the trap but noone else? Where's the evil? Quote: The main character gets kicked out of her house for dying her hair pink ( :] yay). She packs her stuff and leaves. She has just enough money for a train, and dinner that night. So she goes to the train and meets a guy. He starts talking to her, and invites her out to a bar. So they go out, and the guy explains how he is college student, and in a local band ( he told her because the girl has her bass with her ). She tells him her story, all while they are talking, he slips a pill into her drink. Which causes her to pass out. He was going to take advantage of her, but he just couldn't. So he took her back to his place. Thats where I stopped. This story sounds like something you would write to satisfy your own needs. I don't know if I would read something like this - it just doesn't seem interesting enough to satisfy me. Quote: The next one is a fantasy. :3 Its more of a dark one. Its gruesome. A girl runs away from her abusive home, and meets up with a stranger. (Who is a girl.) She was being chased, obviously. But she won't tell by who or what. So the two girls find shelter in an abandoned house. Or so it appears to be, but when the enter, its fansy and clean. They decied to stay there, for as long as it took to find some where else. A while later, the two are asleep, and two men enter from a gigantic door. They start talking about a project, but they hear the girls shifting around. So they shift into a dog and a cat. This one sounds slightly interesting. Obviously - I can't tell you honestly without the full facts but all I'll say is that to start it off, it sounds interesting but where is it going? Quote: Alright these two were child hood friends. They grew up in a sorcery school together, and had that 'puppy dog love' kind of relationship. When they got older, they were chosen to learn more. (Those who choose to teach them more, are known as masters. And those chosen are known as apprentices). But the thing is, that the main girl and the main guy were chosen by different masters. The two masters hated each other, and were out to destroy them, and everything they had. So each of the mains have been training since they were about 10 years of age. It has been about 12 years since then, and they are about to graduate, and stop training. (which means they get to have apprentices). Now they are out to protect their masters. So the main girl is set up against the main guy. She is compasionate, and trys to stop the fighting. Seeing that there isn't a real reason why they are fighting. The main guy is feirce, and thinks that everything close to the enemy should be destroyed and killed. But as they see eachother for the first time in 12 years, old memorys start to arise. This definately sounds like something I would read. But, I don't have much to tell you about it. Obviously, it would be a good read depending on your writing style and the twists you incorporate - but where do the twists come into something like that? Yes the first one, I probably did write in the 8th grade. It was long ago. And Im not sure if I really want to continue it. I don't like to many characters. The second one..I guess i is to satisfy me. Its something I would love to be apart of. But thats what got me started. The third one, its kinda hard for me to tell where its coming from. Or I would have to give up the ending, and I don't really like doing that. The fourth one..I don't know. One that I have been trying to figure out. [names and such] |
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| I need some help on my story idea. Go to post | 15 | Recycle Bin |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:14 am |
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It sounds good.
But it also reminds me of Inuyasha. Except for protecting, and the whole twin thing. Just the whole recarnation, and sealing away the evil guy. But, if you did write it and everything. I would read it. 3nodding |
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| good story idea? Go to post | 5 | Recycle Bin |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 7:08 am |
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It sounds interesting.
But yet, while I read the idea, I was reminded of Disturbia. domokun |
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| Thy story ideas. xD Go to post | 3 | Recycle Bin |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:53 am |
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Alright, the first story I have is one I started like...3 years ago.
I remember this, because I kept changing the name of one of the guys, because I never found the right name. And I can barely remember where I was getting all this inspiration for this. (Feel free to judge them all and stuff. Its all good :3 Negative remarks can make it better.) Alright so, this one is a fantasy type. Of course. Its about magic, I should say plainly. A popular guy from school is on his way to his friends, when he comes by this house on fire. And everyone is just walking by, not even noticing the house is on fire. The guy knows whos house it is too. A quiet girl, who always keeps to herself. She is cute, but he could never date her. He enters the house, and passes out. When he wakes up, he is in a different realm. He finds two girls to explain to him where he is. Everyone there, has magical powers. Only they have a limited amount of times they can use their magic and such. So the girls explain to him how the girl who dissapeared, is the only girl with the highest number, and she never uses her magic. One of the girls, he is with, can read minds, and the other girl can control the minds of those around her, to do what she wants. Thats why the two get along so well. And not to mention are best friends. While they are on their way to find the missing girl, they come along four other people. Two boys and two girls. One girl is a neko (I was in love with nekos long ago) and the other one is a vampire(yess I know>:/). So that means there is a a vampire guy (and yes they are in love). And then there is a shape shifter guy. He can shape shift into anything, and what ever color he is, it resembles his mood. And so on and so on... Okay that was the first one. The next one, isn't really about fantasy. Its more of a real life sort of one. Inspiration was NANA heart I haven't really got much. Just a little. This story is going to have a lot of drama, romance and comedy. Like NANA, but its not exactly like it. Its hard to actually explain this story, since i haven't done much with it. The main character gets kicked out of her house for dying her hair pink ( :] yay). She packs her stuff and leaves. She has just enough money for a train, and dinner that night. So she goes to the train and meets a guy. He starts talking to her, and invites her out to a bar. So they go out, and the guy explains how he is college student, and in a local band ( he told her because the girl has her bass with her ). She tells him her story, all while they are talking, he slips a pill into her drink. Which causes her to pass out. He was going to take advantage of her, but he just couldn't. So he took her back to his place. Thats where I stopped. The next one is a fantasy. :3 Its more of a dark one. Its gruesome. A girl runs away from her abusive home, and meets up with a stranger. (Who is a girl.) She was being chased, obviously. But she won't tell by who or what. So the two girls find shelter in an abandoned house. Or so it appears to be, but when the enter, its fansy and clean. They decied to stay there, for as long as it took to find some where else. A while later, the two are asleep, and two men enter from a gigantic door. They start talking about a project, but they hear the girls shifting around. So they shift into a dog and a cat. Thats as much as I got done. Not so scary, but yeah.. >> it will be xd The last one is probably the one i like the most. Insparation is from Howls Moving Castle heart Alright these two were child hood friends. They grew up in a sorcery school together, and had that 'puppy dog love' kind of relationship. When they got older, they were chosen to learn more. (Those who choose to teach them more, are known as masters. And those chosen are known as apprentices). But the thing is, that the main girl and the main guy were chosen by different masters. The two masters hated each other, and were out to destroy them, and everything they had. So each of the mains have been training since they were about 10 years of age. It has been about 12 years since then, and they are about to graduate, and stop training. (which means they get to have apprentices). Now they are out to protect their masters. So the main girl is set up against the main guy. She is compasionate, and trys to stop the fighting. Seeing that there isn't a real reason why they are fighting. The main guy is feirce, and thinks that everything close to the enemy should be destroyed and killed. But as they see eachother for the first time in 12 years, old memorys start to arise. eek Oh snap..Im done xd So please, anything you would like to say. Anything to make it better. Advice. Such and such. Is all great heart And if you noticed...i didn't say any of my characters names. I just don't like setting down a name, because I could (and probably would) change the name. domokun |
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| Alright..I need motivation. Go to post | 8 | Writers |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:27 am |
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ScaryChelsea Well Bunny, I enjoy writing so much and also reading a good story. You know what really helps me... I discuss my stories with someone and then I get pumped to start writing. it's always good to bounce of ideas. Still, it is hard to stay motivated because sometimes you have a good story to tell but it's hard to put into writing. So if you would like, please feel free to share some ideas of your stories with me. I'll be glad to listen and try to help you. Thank you! I will probably take you up on your offer soon enough. Because I really want to finish at least a couple of my stories. 3nodding |
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| Any horror experts out there? Go to post | 29 | Writers |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:23 am |
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Read books like edgar's.
Mix them up a little so its not like your taking the same idea. And since it sounds like you can't stomach like, horror movies...but if you can stand a little. I would suggest some of Rob Zombies films. But they are pretty gruesome. But it will bring out insanity. :3 |
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| Alright..I need motivation. Go to post | 8 | Writers |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:14 am |
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I always start these stories.
I currently have 5 going right now. Some I haven't even started, and some I have. But I always loose motivation with them. And Im just wondering if anyone knows, how to stay motivated on something like this. (I mean once I get more written on them I will probably post them or something, to see what everyone thinks.) But I just need MOTIVATION some one help...please |
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| Does anyone still like Sailor moon? Go to post | 111 | Anime/Manga/Comics |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:45 am |
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Heck yeah I do!
My first anime I ever saw when I was little. I was always known as Sailor Venus between my friends and cousins<3 I have 2 of the movies and one of the series. Talking about it, just makes me wish it was still on t.v Cause i would seriously watch it every time its on. x3 domokun |
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| Good anime recommendations that aren't Naruto,Bleach etc.. Go to post | 193 | Chatterbox |
Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:40 am |
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Good animes that i know of [I am more of a manga girl]:
NANA- its subed FLCL (Fooly Cooly) Inuyasha Ergo Proxy Princess Tutu Ghost Stories Manga: Angel Sanctuary Doubt!! Pita-Ten Hot Gimmick Aoi House KARE:First Love Re razz lay Paradise Kiss Real Lies Absolute Boyfriend Ultra Maniac Fushigi Yugi Full Moon Tokyo Boys and Girls Godchild Crimson Hero Yotsuba :3 Wow I didn't think my list was that long xD |
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