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| » √αmpîrε Hεαrτ « (P R I V A T E) Go to post | 36 | Barton Town |
Sat Apr 04, 2009 7:44 am |
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Falicity's face darkened as he lowered his head closer to hers. She tried to listen intently but only heard a few words. Her heart beat inclined and she acted on impulse: She grabbed his face with both her hands and gazed. She brushed his hair out of his face to see his whole face. She couldn't help but smile at him. The intensity between the two grew and she felt like acting on impulse but she let go of him and had a torn look on her face. "I'm sorry," She said looking and turning away from him, "I shouldn't act so childest. Or let impulses take advantage of me."
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| PEOPLE OF GAIA!!! I need your opinions! Winners! Go to post | 21 | Chatterbox |
Sat Feb 28, 2009 3:24 am |
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Undead Cupcake By now, I knew something had to be wrong because I saw silent, quiet tears fall down Curtis's cheeks and hit the glass table. And let me tell you something: He never cries. This man had a heart as strong steel, but was as soft, caring and warm as a loving embrace. I felt like something was missing. I franticly began to look around the room for my mother, but she wasn't there. I have no idea. Or, since it seems to be a problem with the mom, compare it something about her. Like her embrace, or something like that. It'd be like irony or something. The irony in it is the fact that, before he mother left to go to this building, she never said 'I love you' so you can only assume. |
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| PEOPLE OF GAIA!!! I need your opinions! Winners! Go to post | 21 | Chatterbox |
Sat Feb 28, 2009 3:11 am |
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I'm sorry to have to disappoint you, Kovva, but it actually does. By now, I knew something had to be wrong because I saw silent, quiet tears fall down Curtis's cheeks and hit the glass table. And let me tell you something: He never cries. This man had a heart as strong steel, but was as soft, caring and warm as a ----------. I felt like something was missing. I franticly began to look around the room for my mother, but she wasn't there. Yes, there are some grammatical errors in there but that's because I couldn't see through the tears in my eyes. This portion of thebook is when the main character learns about the death of her mother. |
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| PEOPLE OF GAIA!!! I need your opinions! Winners! Go to post | 21 | Chatterbox |
Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:45 am |
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PEOPLE OF GAIA! I am in desperate need of a word. Or a collection of words. I would really apreciate it. You see, I'm writing a book and currenly have writers block. If you have rude words, I don't wish to hear them. The words can be about anything that is atleast PG-13. If you have questions about my book, please PM me. I take all question that are worth taking in. =D I love curioustity. Now time for ethe prizes. First place gets 3.5K. Second place gets 1.5K. You have until March 15. The best entry wins. Good Luck. I'm sure you want me to get to the senetence all ready so hear you go. . . This man had a heart as strong as steel, but it was as soft, caring and warm as a . . . ::FIRST PLACE:: Schmutzige Wurst ::SECOND PLACE:: Battyish I appreciate the one that were respect, and those who stood up for what was right. But one thing that bothered me the most was something about babies. What is wrong with all of ya'll? Babies? Wow. But as promised the two abovewill get what they right fully deserve. It will be featured in my book but will have a slight twist. Thank all of you, And don't get hit by a bus. =) |
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