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Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:36 pm
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I really do have to respond to this...
Macai Fanfiction is by its very nature bad in my opinion for the following reasons:
1) It's not creative. It does not have the potential for any genuine originality because it is pointedly unoriginal; it either takes characters and uses them in the right way, which makes it unoriginal on the basis that the writer did not use his own character, or it uses the same characters unfaithfully to the canon, which makes it unoriginal on the basis that you can't make up your own name for your essentially new character. Since all fanfiction uses characters from the canon, it is unoriginal, and thereby patently uncreative.
You can do both, you know. Take a character, make a situation, and have them react to it how they would if that same situation would have happened in the show. This is NOT an either/or situation here.
And, as for the part I bolded, not all fan fiction uses the characters from the canon. I've seen way too many pokemon fanfictions with all original characters (trainer fics anyone?), unless you count the pokemon themselves.
Quote: 2) It is pretentious. When a fanfic writer "extends the story," it implies that the story was not complete. When a fanfic writer "adds insight to a minor character," it implies that the character should not have been minor. When a fanfic writer "changes situations to 'see' what happens," it implies that the story itself is wrong. Based on the fact that these things apply to most if not all fanfictions, this renders fanfiction as a concept pretentious by its very nature.
I have to call bullshit on this, as it is assuming what the writer thinks. Just because I write fanfiction does not mean I think the show is "incomplete," "wrong," or anything of that sort. You may add the implication to the story, but just because you think it has it does not mean it actually does.
Quote: 3) It is meaningless, and dramatically ineffective. Stories are told because they have underlying messages and symbolism. They are not an arbitrary series of events (if it's a good story), and by extending the story beyond its conclusion, changing around character situations, or providing details into things which didn't matter to the original story, you trivialize the original story, and your own, by making the events arbitrary.
No, you do not. Just bcause it is a fan fiction does NOT mean it cannot have an underlying message and/or symbolism. This is making assumptions about the whole crop, which you just can't do unless you read every one of them. They don't all fall under these three definitions, or even under just one. You don't trivialize anything; if you do your homework and actually write it like it should be written, you actually add on to the story. Fill in gaps that were left in the original.
Quote: Can you tell me the merits of fanfiction, then, or are you just going to scream opinion dropping?
I can not tell you the merits, because they are merits to me. Just because I go by them, does not mean they are merits for everyone else, so it is pointless to bring them up.
Alas, I need to go to a class now. You can PM me rather then post here if you want to make sure I get the reply, if you want to continue on.
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:23 pm
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Macai BadLuckNovelist Quote: The fable model of storytelling begins by providing a message, idea or thought, which is to be substantiated throughout or at the end of the story. Examples might include, "Paranoia is a synonym for longevity," "Compromise leads to self loathing," and "The hero is always seen as the villain."
I'm surprised I've never actually heard of the fable model...
Quote: The metaphor model of storytelling is a little more difficult. You take another piece of literature (or something of the sort), and break it down into key plot events. Then, you write a story that parallels those key plot events, and make clear and tastefully placed references to the original work, either by quoting it at the beginning of chapters or finding clues about it in the book, or whatever.
This one interests me. I think I might try my hand at using it, see where it goes.
Quote: Finally, I am heavy into the genres of fantasy, science fiction, and horror.
Ah, another one. smile I'm also into those, though I'm less into horror and sci-fi, and more into fantasy. Forgive me for not quoting your entire post, but I only copied the parts of your post that I'm really replying to: the pertinent parts.
Alright, I agree that I like those two models of storytelling, and I'm going to give you an example of each. Unfortunately, however, they're both horror works, and both are quite morbid.
I'm going to present to you the fable novella "The Hellbound Heart." It is all about the underlying theme of humanity being intrinsically evil, and substantiates it with the literal selling of one's soul to "come back." It also makes a point of saying that the demons (the Cenobites) who play an important role in the novella are not in all actuality evil, and in fact are more like twisted bringers of justice. You can find it on Amazon here.
The metaphor example I'd like to present to you is Baltimore, or the Steadfast Tin Soldier and the Vampire. I'm not going to get too into the plot of Baltimore, but the entire novel is a huge metaphor to another work, the Steadfast Tin Soldier. It can also be found on Amazon here.
(some other people responded, so to prevent myself from double-posting, I will be editing this post to get a response in for them as well)
I'll look into those, thanks. As I said, I have no recollection of the two models being mentioned, even in the Creative Writing course I took in the last school year, so this is something new for me. smile
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Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:53 pm
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Heart of the Fallen Angel
That said, fanfiction is generally not well-recieved outside a few people who feel that the fanfiction (often the slash pairings and whatnot) is how it should have been. As for Pandora's comment on fanfiction.net, it's not necesarily true. You can find plenty of good stories on FF.net, but you have to wade through endless amounts of drivel, crap, and poor grammar to find them.
It is well received in general. I even remember being on this one writing forum, and one of the girls made her utter hatred of fanfiction known, and how she would OMGSUETHEMALL if they dared touch her novel. neutral I just laughed at her.
I don't know, regardless of how bad a lot of fanfiction can be, I don't think fan fiction in and of itself deserves the bad rep. The current writers should, maybe, but not the idea of fan fiction. A story cannot create itself with the writer.
I agree about FFN. I'm a member that, and I tend to stick to only certain writers, ones I know that churn out good stories. Then again, no matter what site you go on you'll find s**t, so blasting on FFN for having s**t...yeah, no. Now if you want to talk about the attitude of people there, then we'll talk.
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Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:41 pm
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Quote: I understand the concept of storytelling. However, my gripe isn't just with a lack of storytelling found in frankly most fanfictions I've read, but the utter lack of creativity involved in even most well written fanfictions.
I'll admit again, that is a problem I've seen getting worse. I've been reading and writing it for roughly 6 years now, and I've seen the decline that has been occurring. Though it really varies from fandom to fandom, as far as I can see. You also see the same in original fiction, though, which is really I'd say worse then if a fan fiction is uncreative. It's a shame, regardless, as fan fiction has so much potential in it....
Quote: Yes, "What if humans had Pokemon features?" is almost a good concept, if you ask me. However, why "Pokemon features?" Why not just "animal features," or "mystical features?" And furthermore, why would humans have these animal features?
Not features. That would be humans that took on the physical characters of their pokemon counterparts, I'd think. However, what my concept is of the elements, the attacks. For an example, I'll use Pikachu, an electric type. It/he/she can do Thunderbolt. A human of the same element, electric, would be able to do something similar, if not the same, as Thunderbolt. A better term I could have used instead of element is powers, attacks, or spells. Though to go into the why would take me awhile, and I'm sure you have better things to do then listen to me go on about my fan fiction. XD
Quote: What-ifs provide interesting examples, but not entire story hooks. When you just use a "what-fi" and write the entire short story or novel based on that, you raise many questions; the why-sos, the how-whens, and the where-ats, most of the time none of which get answered. For this reason, I do not like the "what-if" model of storytelling.
That was what I meant in my remark that good authors know how to take their what-if and make an actual story out of it, answering the hows, why's, what's, and where's of it. Cross the t's, dot the i's, so on and so forth. It all comes down to the talent of who is behind the story, which fan fiction has an unfortunate lack of right now.
Quote: The fable model of storytelling begins by providing a message, idea or thought, which is to be substantiated throughout or at the end of the story. Examples might include, "Paranoia is a synonym for longevity," "Compromise leads to self loathing," and "The hero is always seen as the villain."
I'm surprised I've never actually heard of the fable model...
Quote: The metaphor model of storytelling is a little more difficult. You take another piece of literature (or something of the sort), and break it down into key plot events. Then, you write a story that parallels those key plot events, and make clear and tastefully placed references to the original work, either by quoting it at the beginning of chapters or finding clues about it in the book, or whatever.
This one interests me. I think I might try my hand at using it, see where it goes.
Quote: Finally, I am heavy into the genres of fantasy, science fiction, and horror.
Ah, another one. smile I'm also into those, though I'm less into horror and sci-fi, and more into fantasy.
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Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:05 pm
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Macai The reason I often have gripes with fanfiction is because of the reality that it's pretentious. I read novels, and write myself. I even roleplay (not in an anime style, mind you) very often.
However, I design my own characters, and write to tell stories, not to present hypothetical what-ifs.
I can certainly see one producing these what-ifs by writing about them, but at the same time, why would I want to read this? Very often, fan fictions boil down to meandering character interactions with no real underlying theme, message, or plot.
I also read novels, write, and role play, though I've been doing less of all three as of late. Though it is slightly off-topic, what types do you like? Fantasy, sci-fi, historical...?
Well, that's the thing about fan fiction. It isn't just a matter of what-ifs. It's taking that what-if and making a story out of it....if they are a good writer.
Take my fan fiction Shadow League for example. The what-if of it would be 'What if people had a pokemon's elements?" However, I took that question, and weaved a story idea using it. It went up and beyond that question to form its own plot that deviated from the question.
I'll admit that there are too many people that try to write fan fiction and forget that it is supposed to be a story. They take the what-if, and forget to make a story out of it. IE: The 14 year olds writing smut fan fictions with no plot.
It really all comes down to each fan fiction. I ask that same question. What makes me want to read it? If it's mindless drivel, there is nothing there to make me want to read it. But if they took it and went farther then the question, then it can and is as good as any original novel.
If I'm getting incoherent, I apologize.
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Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:49 pm
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I think we cannot really label it as one or the other, black or white. While for one fan fiction is may just be trash some horny 14 year old wrote, the other might be that the author is genuinely writing it to see what might happen had things been different for the characters. For others it could be both, or neither.
For me, I write the character different from what they are portrayed in the show, and at different ages. It isn't because I'm unhappy with the canon version, but because I like seeing what might of happened if he had been a little less nice, or she had been less of a b***h. What would have happened if a war had erupted at a certain time, or if something in the canon did not exist. It isn't a matter of getting off to it; it's just a matter of curiosity for me.
You really cannot pin one generic explanation or label on it. Everyone of them is different, and written for different reasons.
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Gor: Legitimate lifestyle or irresponsible fantasy?
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Tue Nov 06, 2007 5:24 am
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Amerixican Quote: You make it sound so condensending for someone to want their mom to tuck them in at night when they are a little kid, but instead be turned down because mom is too ... busy pretend playing a sex slave in some fantasy online rp.
Why the flood of resentment against me? I just asked you what your mom didn't give you.
My mother did not tuck me in at night. Millions of kids don't get tucked in at night. Its no big deal. You get as much of your mom's time as she decides and that's it.
And who said your opinion on the correct amount of tuck in time is correct?
I think the issue was less about mommy not fluffing his pillows and tucking him in with teddy, and more about how her sex life was of such great importance to her, even topping her own child on the priority list. I do believe that is called neglect and is illegal for a reason.
Taking care of a child is more then feeding and clothing them. It's taking care of them emotionally too, which his did not by not paying enough attention to him when he was little, I imagine.
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Way to get our hopes up Disney.
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Tue Nov 06, 2007 5:17 am
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Xenos00 I love how the E.D. bashes anything that's even slightly differant.
This is someones desires, not whining and whatnot.
Gahahaha, I find that rather interesting, considering that many of the people here won't debate anything off of the internet.
...but you know, i'll bet you ten to one that someone will reply back saying that they do. Untill I decided to say this specific line.
E.D.
So predictable...
This is supposed to be a place for exchanging beliefs and opinions, and possibly learn something new.
Not bash others beliefs and tell them it's a lie.
Or shut them down with 500 facts.
Hahaha, I bet someone else predicted I would say this too.
Amazing, isn't it?
Quote: ED should be a place for users to have informed, engrossing discussions on topics that interest them and to read about and learn about issues that they are not as familiar with from users who are more familiar. It is not a place to dump opinions and leave, to not support those opinions, or to make short, contentless posts.
Try again sir. Straight from Gaia's mouth. A proper debate uses not only opinions, but FACTS to back up those opinions. While in a thread like this one 'facts' are not easy, if at all possible, to come by, in general you know nothing about the ED.
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"Why do Foreigners hate americans so much?What did we do?"
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Tue Nov 06, 2007 5:07 am
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tovben Sakura1406 What do WE do to make foriegners mad?Americans like me,didn't do ANYTHING!We're just playing on gaia and then i see posts on "america sucks" and "i hate america well blow you up blah, blah, blah".Us kids in California and wherever didn't do anything!Blame it on the president!! NOT US What did the kids do to make some Asian kid mad and make a post saying Americans suck.You haven't met every american so how would you know if it was are fault?
You should not feel bad most people hate America because they were either convinced that America is the source of all their problems (those countries mainly include Russia and some Arab countries) or because they are competing with to become the world biggest economy (like some Asian countries) but the bottom line is that America didn’t really do anything wrong.
So it started a war by lying Look at history all countries did that in 100 years no one will remember it
So that automatically makes it right? "Oh, all countries do it, so we shouldn't be angry when another decides to!" How about if a bunch of countries started killing off people as a new sport? Would it be alright because it's not just one country doing it?
I, as a resident of the United States, hate it with a fierce passion. I give it the respect it deserves for allowing me to at least make minimal use of it's resources, but the screwing over I've had done by it has left a permanent bitter taste in my mouth in regards to the political/government side of it. The people are a totally different set of issues entirely.
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